Monthly Archives: May 2011

Getting Ready for “The Help”

Not long ago I announced that I’ll be deconstructing the bestselling novel “The Help,” by Kathryn Stockett, in a series of Storyfix posts.  This is the first in that series.

If you don’t recall my past deconstructions of novels and films (dive into the archives, there are a half dozen or so buried there), these are a great way to see and analyze all six core competencies of a successful story in action… especially structure.

Call it proof, call it transparency, call it enlightenment, call it the opening of a critical door of awareness.  There’s nothing like seeing a theory in full glorious action to bring it alive.

Many are excited and relieved to see the plot points right where they’re supposed to be, doing what they’re supposed to do, and the contextual missions of the four story parts unfolding in fully aligned, textbook glory.

Cynics, not so much.  Because they must now look elsewhere to disprove the literary theory – which they tend to reject – and the validity behind all this story engineering stuff.  

My hope is that this series turns a few cynics into enthusiasts for what is true… and as you’ll see, proven.

I’m getting ready to launch the series in a week or so.

Until then, I wanted to share something that “The Help” shows us at the very highest levels of our understanding.  A little morsel of clarity that is of primary value to readers who are also writers, much more so than the reading public in general.

A general reading public which, by the way, bought this book by the warehouse full. 

Let’s assume this means you.

The Help” was Stockett’s first novel, which adds to the utter shock and awe of its performance, both commercially and critically.  It sports the usual litany of home run credentials: it was a #1 New York Times bestseller (for a year or so); all the other bestseller lists, too; it is currently #1 on the NY Times paperback list; and there’s that inevitable major movie deal (the film comes out in August, you can see the preview on Youtube HERE… but you’ll have to tolerate a 15 second commercial first).

Even better, virtually every reviewer praised the book for its power, its “pitch-perfect” delivery (a phrase used over and over, which speaks to the core competency of “writing voice”), its humor and its heart.

It defies genre, and in many ways qualifies as The Great American novel.  Probably won’t end up with that title, since it’s about the worst and darkest part of our history and culture.  That said, it’s a historical novel that’s about humanity more than history.

Not one critic praised the structure of the book, though many held the story up as iconic and important.  Why?  Because the structure is perfect.  And when structure is perfect, nobody notices it because they’re too busy swooning about the other five core competencies that it empowers.

That’s a loaded sentence, which I encourage you to read again.  Because it nails the relationship between structure and the rest of the things that will make a story successful.  Nothing works without it.

It’s like a perfectly tuned engine.  You don’t notice the engineering, you just appreciate the ride.

Here is the most exciting statistic of all.

Or, depressing.  This is half-full-or-half-empty pop quiz moment.

The Help” was rejected by 45 literary agents.

Read that again. 

William Goldman, the sage Oscar winning screenwriter and novelist who said of the movie business – and is equally and obviously true of the publishing business – “nobody knows anything,” is proven correct once again.

The First Lesson of “The Help”

You’re gonna want to read this novel if you haven’t already. 

And if you have, get ready to want to read it again.  Doing so – this or any other deconstructed story – in context to what should suddenly be clear, liberating and motivating in a way it isn’t to someone who isn’t an enlightened or open-minded writer, is the quickest route up the learning curve that I know.

This book is a clinic in mission-driven, perfect pitch, thematically devastating storytelling.

The story has three point-of-view narrators – right there it’s already outside the box, with a generation of academic “creative writing” teachers rolling over in their graves – any one of which could be nominated as the protagonist.

But the more you read, the more you realize the hero of this story is Skeeter, a rich and not remotely spoiled young woman embarking on her career and life in general in 1962 Jackson, Mississippi.  What career? 

She desperately wants to be a writer.

Not a coincidence, I dare surmise.

In fact (and this is a lesson in concepting, which is one of the six core competencies), Skeeter’s chosen profession is the driving catalyst of the entire story.  Without it, “The Help” is nothing but a series of character profiles in a historical context.

Without that career choice, there is no story.

At first, like so many of us, Skeeter just wants to write

She’s not sure what or even why, and she’ll take anything that requires a typewriter. 

Which she soon does, writing household tips for a local daily for what amounts to nothing more than cigarette money (remember, this was 1962, when the belief systems of the day – also residing at the heart and soul of this story – ruled without question or surgeon general warnings).

Skeeter gets in touch with a Big Time Book Editor in New York, who barely gives her the time of day (that much hasn’t changed since 1962, by the way).  But she does manage to squeeze in some life-changing career advice, and Skeeter listens.

One wonders if Stockett herself lived this little Epiphany in her own writing journey.  Could be the book began there, rather than some life-long burning desire to write about the civil rights movement.  Or not.  The two may have collided in an inspired moment of fate. 

That’s often what happens, too.  Only Ms. Stockett knows.

Collisions between creative sparks and burning themes… that can be a very good thing.

That grouchy editor’s advice was this: write something worth writing

Something that hits people right where they live.  That challenges.  That upsets a farmers market full of apple carts.  That lacks respect for the status quo.  That makes the establishment uncomfortable.  That rights wrongs and exposes truth.

That pisses people off… because it’s so right.

Not hard to find a qualifying landscape for such a book in 1962 Mississippi, where virtually everything about that culture and the belief systems that defined it was in need of challenging.

I’m hoping you’ll notice how that advice alters the course of Skeeter’s life. 

Not just her career, but her entire future, and the future of everyone in her sphere of influence and relationship. 

As it did with both the protagonist and author of this novel, hearing this call for courage clearly can be the defining moment of your writing journey.

If you haven’t read about the Six Core Competencies yet and would like to get more out of this series of deconstruction posts, click HERE.


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Weekend Writerly Wonderings, Wanderings and Wistful Whatevers

The Periodic Table of Storytelling

Remember science class?  That poster next to the blackboard full of little squares containing letters that looked more like Scrabble than the foundation of all physical creation?

Me neither.  But I do remember looking at that thing and asking… why?

Storyfix reader Eva Moon is sharing a link to a vast improvement on all things periodic-table-esque… a Periodic Table of Storytelling by a guy who calls himself the Computer Sherpa.  It’s an interactive interface with enough sub-topics about writing that, as he warns, might keep you busy for days.

You can buy the print if so moved (no, I’m not an affiliate, I just think it’s cool).

Click HERE to check it out (click on the image for a larger version).   Because we can never have enough interesting stuff on our walls.

One Reader’s Home Run

Storyfix reader and contributor Chuck Hustmyre is a novelist.  And he’s living the dream many of us cling to: they’ve made a movie out of his novel, “House of the Rising Sun.”

In case you didn’t think an iUniverse title had a shot at such heights.

Check out the preview HERE.  This is Big Time, even with no big stars.  A little violent and sexual (isn’t every good thriller?), so enter informed.  Let’s support Chuck and buy the book and then see his movie when it releases as a DVD this summer.

Something To Blow Your Advance On

I love Costco.  Buy a lot of books there (obligatory relevance duly noted).  Their stuff is supposed to be cheap. 

How cheap is a 55-year old bottle of Scotch?  How about twelve grand?

They also had a bottle of Cognac selling for $21,999, I kid you not.

That’s a lot of Kindle ebooks at $2.99 each.



The Best Part of Being Published

Everybody does this when they get published: you go into bookstores, hunt down your book, and move the inventory to a better location. 

Or, you can have your friends do it for you. 

A friend of mine did that when my first novel, Darkness Bound, was published in 2000… as a paperback.  With the best of intentions he moved the book to the bestseller rack, putting it in the #1 slot (that’d be upper left) ahead of Stephen King and Dean Koontz’s new hardcovers.

It was, you see, a rack for hardcover bestsellers.

They had a shoot-on-sight poster of me near the door at Barnes & Noble for years.

Anyhow, it’s still fun to see your book on a shelf, especially when friends send you pictures of it.  This image is from my dear friend Renetta Krager, taken at a Borders in Portland, where I no longer live. 








Write something amazing this weekend. 

If not, do something amazing.  Life is short.  Live your story.



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