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The Key to Writing an Inherently Episodic Story… Effectively

Unless something really cool or scary happens, a novel about what happened on your summer vacation probably isn’t going to work.

Yes, “Summer of ’42” (a film based on a memoir by American screenwriter Herman Raucher) was a modern classic.  But really, did you fall in love with a married hottie like Jennifer O’Neal during your summer of “42?

Didn’t think so.

“Saving Private Ryan,” episodic as it was, wasn’t just a cinematic stage upon which the storytellers sought to illustrate the daily grind of Tom Hanks and Company as they plodded across the French countryside.  Yes, it was indeed harrowing and scary – also totally linear, and thus, episodic – but that was never the literary point of it all.

It was never the story.

Saving a U.S. solider named Ryan, for reasons that bore significant emotional weight, was the point of it all.  The mission had stakes.  It gave us a reason to root for the hero as those episodic scenes ticked off.

As an author, you need to be clear on that same dynamic –the relationship between your scenes and the higher, broader arc of your story.  The latter is what fuels the former.

Your scenes depend on, and are trumped by, the context of stakes and ultimate purpose, rather than the in-the-moment experience.  (Writers of epic battles and long days on the trail, take note here.)

And that’s the key to your episodic novel.  Even when your point is to make us feel the injustice of prejudice or the thrill of young love or the drama of a life of crime.

There needs to be more going on than simply what happens, or even what it means in terms of the reality it explores.

Episodic stories can work.

But only if you understand this principle.  Only when there is an over-arcing dramatic question in play.

Anyone who begins the writing of novel has something specific in mind – even if it seems less than specific – at Square One.  At the moment that initial spark of inspiration hits.

A novel about prejudice.  A novel about growing up in Brooklyn.  A novel about a young girl looking for her unknown parents.  A novel about being lost at sea.  A novel about heartbreak.  A novel about the challenges of being in a primary relationship.  A novel about finding a magic talisman that releases the power of an all-powerful wizard.

All are worthy.  And yet, all are inherently episodic until something else — a hero-specific dramatic question — is in play.

Trust me,  despite what the reviewers wrote, “The Help” didn’t work because it illustrated a bunch of episodes with black maids being harshly treated by their white employers, thematic and powerfully depressing as they were.  The story had much more going for it than that, even if “that” was the author’s highest purpose and her initial inspiration

Only rarely is an initial moment of clarity of purpose a fully formed “story.”  Those who begin writing a draft fueled by intention alone – “I’ll figure it out as I go…” – quickly discover there is much more involved, because so much more is always required.

Thinly disguised memoir and fictionalized true stories often fall victim to this trap.  It happened, it was excruciating and thrilling and illuminating and life-changing… and so, in your novel, you show a sequence of things that show “it” happening.  But that doesn’t exempt you from this principle… the story will tank if there isn’t an end-game in play.

To take this point to the next level, consider this: you can’t just toss in an obligatory purpose or dramatic mission as justification for a sequence of scenes, either.  Because it is the very emotional essence, the degree of weight and resonance of that is what readers will engage with…

… not because there is another battle, another abuse, another injustice to behold.  But because of what is at stake.

In the end, episodes aren’t story.  The hero’s goal, the stakes behind the goal, the encountering of opposition to that quest, always trump the hero’s memories and the daily grind of getting to them.

Battle/fight scenes are fine.  But what the hero is fighting for is what makes them work.

If you can’t get past that, consider a memoir instead.

This is why movies based on video games – where the in-the-moment experience is the appeal – have yet to draw a meaningful audience or a place in storytelling history.

The movie Tron was terrible, as a case on point, for just this reason.  As was Ender’s Game, which was based on a much more literate bestselling novel by the same name.

The latter Batman movies were terrific, because each battle the hero engaged in had consequences and backstory-driven weight to them.

The Magic of Story Development

Story development, stemming from whatever the initial idea might have been, always comes with the territory, no matter what process you employ to get there.

There are many dozens of items to check off the roster of what is required of a story that works.  If that sounds daunting, I’ve previously categorized them into six core competencies and six realms of story physics that at least give you something to shoot for.

When your initial spark is indeed the right stuff, the true grist of greatness (as it was in “The Help”), you’ll find yourself building the other eleven elements upon and around that core initial building block.

The acid test here is easy: be honest, what is your goal at any given moment in your narrative?  To plop the reader into a scene, because it happened, or it’s cool, or it’s another example of the issue at hand?  Or, is it to forward the story itself?

Without the latter, the former is always a transitory experience. 

“The Lord of the Rings” worked not because of the battle scenes, but because of the ring and what it means.   The ring was the quest, and thus it – not the endless battle scenes – was the point.  Don’t confuse episodic television or video games or the demographic nature of an audience with the art storytelling in novels.

Harry Potter was always about the hero discovering who killed his parents, and discovering himself in the process.  Every book.  Every magical scene in every book had the shadow of that larger context behind it.

A story isn’t just what happens, in what order.

A great story is more about WHY it happens.  The stakes behind the episodes, over and above the experience of the episodes.

That is the key: the stakes the characters are playing for… fighting battles for… taking dangerous journeys for… taking risks for.  Without the WHY driving those scenes we are left with little more than a diary.

There is no sacrifice when backstory, purpose and stakes enter the storytelling equation to become context for all that transpires.  Indeed, there is hope in all of this.

And in that sense, your initial idea/spark is both a gift and a burden.

Because how you frame it will make or break the story itself.


UPDATE:  the deconstruction ebook using Deadly Faux as a case study is still in development.  If you’ve opted in, you’re on the list.  I hope to get this out in January.  If you haven’t opted in, click HERE for details on how to get this FREE ebook.


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What Has Your Publisher Done For You Lately?


Here’s what mine did recently…  a mass mailer.  Thought I’d share it… ’tis the season. Thanks!
“An absolute must read, DEADLY FAUX is guaranteed entertainment.” —Robert Dugoni, New York Times bestselling author of THE JURY MASTER

“After half a century of being on the lookout for a crime fiction writer with a voice that rivals Chandler’s, one has finally appeared…. His name is Larry Brooks. The guy has a slick tone and a crackling, cynical wit with lots of vivid descriptions (of both interior and exterior landscapes), and the sparkling figures of speech dance off the page and explode in your inner ear. Though as modern as an iPad 5S, he is truly and remarkably Chandleresque. He’s dazzling. Check out his new one, Deadly Faux—it’s sexy, complex, intelligent; a truly delightful novel with more plot twists than a plate of linguine swimming in olive oil.”

—James N. Frey, author of How to Write a Damn Good Novel

Set in the gritty allure of a Las Vegas casino, Deadly Faux is an unstoppable thriller of deceit and seduction.

Wolfgang Schmitt, ex-underwear model, self-proclaimed wisecrack, and cynical copywriter turned undercover agent, is biding his time, unsure how to spend the millions he scored after his recent undercover mission for the FBI (as chronicled in Bait and Switch). His life becomes suddenly more complicated when he might be called in for a new mission; if it’s off the books and calls for a touch of seduction, Wolf is the man for the job.

But trouble comes in threes. On the same day Wolf is visiting his mother in a nursing home, he makes three troubling discoveries: the place is going under and he may need to step in; the stash in his offshore account has completely vanished; and the promising new woman in his life is actually a Fed, vetting him for another undercover gig. His mission: to entrap a casino-owning couple suspected of involvement with the organized crime factions piping untold amounts of money through the gambling mecca’s glamorous underworld. All of this seems nearly impossible to pull off, probably illegal as hell, and if this is anything like his last gig, nothing is as it seems.

Full of crime, passion, and betrayal, Deadly Faux finds Wolf cornered in a dangerous undercover mission in Sin City, forced to use his wits, charm, and gambler’s luck to survive in the dark underbelly of Las Vegas.

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Larry Brooks is the author of six critically-acclaimed thrillers, and the guy behind, one of the fastest-growing and most respected writing sites on the internet. Author of Story Engineering: Understanding the Six Core Competencies of Successful Writing and Story Physics: Harnessing the Underlying Forces of Storytelling, Brooks teaches writing workshops across the country. He lives with his wife and children in Scottsdale, AZ.

And don’t miss these other great titles from Larry Brooks:

Bait and Switch
Darkness Bound
Pressure Points
Serpent’s Dance

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