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		<title>By: janice</title>
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		<dc:creator>janice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Jul 2009 10:06:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>PS Any chance of you getting the Ajax Comments Editor plugin? You&#039;ll attract writers over here, and most of them appreciate the gesture. I keep leaving horrendous typos in your boxes, and smileys don&#039;t &#039;take&#039; so they just look like punctuation gone haywire.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>PS Any chance of you getting the Ajax Comments Editor plugin? You&#8217;ll attract writers over here, and most of them appreciate the gesture. I keep leaving horrendous typos in your boxes, and smileys don&#8217;t &#8216;take&#8217; so they just look like punctuation gone haywire.</p>
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		<title>By: janice</title>
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		<dc:creator>janice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Jul 2009 10:03:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I notice my typos best in the preview screen, too! 

This was a stomper, Larry. I have a friend who&#039;s a well respected TV presenter, literary critic and author. But although I love her dearly, she&#039;s literary snob and almost vomits if I mention Dan Brown or J.K.Rowling to her. (It&#039;s actually wicked fun to do it on purpose. ;)) But I think she&#039;s missing a huge point, unless she&#039;s &lt;i&gt;deliberately&lt;/i&gt; chosen to have the respect of a few other other academics and literary critics instead of posts of cash and popularity. The points you mention above are the golden keys; they make millionaires out of good writers. I adore the Harry Potter books. She writes brilliantly, but our whole family re-reads them because of their cinematographic qualities, and because of the points you make above.  We are totally engaged with the people -the world -she has created. By far the biggest reason for films that flop is writers thinking they don&#039;t have to do what you suggest above. take Burn After reading, for example. I hated it. The plot was intriguing enough to carry me for a bit, but couldn&#039;t empathise with or give a shit about any of the characters. 

Keep them coming, Larry! I&#039;m adding a link to this site on my blog. If all the folk who enjoy me discussing writing jump ship and come here, I&#039;ll probably have to &#039;retire&#039; and take up knitting, but at least I&#039;ll know they&#039;re in good hands!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I notice my typos best in the preview screen, too! </p>
<p>This was a stomper, Larry. I have a friend who&#8217;s a well respected TV presenter, literary critic and author. But although I love her dearly, she&#8217;s literary snob and almost vomits if I mention Dan Brown or J.K.Rowling to her. (It&#8217;s actually wicked fun to do it on purpose. <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> ) But I think she&#8217;s missing a huge point, unless she&#8217;s <i>deliberately</i> chosen to have the respect of a few other other academics and literary critics instead of posts of cash and popularity. The points you mention above are the golden keys; they make millionaires out of good writers. I adore the Harry Potter books. She writes brilliantly, but our whole family re-reads them because of their cinematographic qualities, and because of the points you make above.  We are totally engaged with the people -the world -she has created. By far the biggest reason for films that flop is writers thinking they don&#8217;t have to do what you suggest above. take Burn After reading, for example. I hated it. The plot was intriguing enough to carry me for a bit, but couldn&#8217;t empathise with or give a shit about any of the characters. </p>
<p>Keep them coming, Larry! I&#8217;m adding a link to this site on my blog. If all the folk who enjoy me discussing writing jump ship and come here, I&#8217;ll probably have to &#8216;retire&#8217; and take up knitting, but at least I&#8217;ll know they&#8217;re in good hands!</p>
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		<title>By: Sunryo</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sunryo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 Jul 2009 14:16:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Some good ideas and well explained.

Thanks for the post.

I&#039;m enjoying following your articles here.

Your method of editing posts is remarkably similar to mine. ;)  It&#039;s funny how those small typos, ackward sentences become so clear after the publish button is clicked.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Some good ideas and well explained.</p>
<p>Thanks for the post.</p>
<p>I&#8217;m enjoying following your articles here.</p>
<p>Your method of editing posts is remarkably similar to mine. <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' />   It&#8217;s funny how those small typos, ackward sentences become so clear after the publish button is clicked.</p>
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