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		<title>By: Worth a Look: Rebecca Berto &#38; Larry Brooks &#171; Paul Welch</title>
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		<dc:creator>Worth a Look: Rebecca Berto &#38; Larry Brooks &#171; Paul Welch</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Feb 2012 21:40:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] particular, she highlights the skills she learned from Larry Brooks, author of Story Engineering. Larry&#8217;s book is definitely on my wishlist, as it sounds like [...]</description>
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		<title>By: Jen</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-79368</link>
		<dc:creator>Jen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 02 Feb 2012 15:37:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Lovin&#039; your book and your site. They&#039;ve both been a great help. I am particularly enamored with &#039;what if&#039; right now. It helped me immensely with a block in my plot.

Just wanted to let you know though, I&#039;ve already signed up for your newsletter but I&#039;m still getting the lovely, but now annoying, modal window encouraging me to sign up for a newsletter I&#039;ve already signed up for. This happens nny time I go to a new page or blog post. I think there are gremlins in your cookies. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Lovin&#8217; your book and your site. They&#8217;ve both been a great help. I am particularly enamored with &#8216;what if&#8217; right now. It helped me immensely with a block in my plot.</p>
<p>Just wanted to let you know though, I&#8217;ve already signed up for your newsletter but I&#8217;m still getting the lovely, but now annoying, modal window encouraging me to sign up for a newsletter I&#8217;ve already signed up for. This happens nny time I go to a new page or blog post. I think there are gremlins in your cookies. <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Zelda Zerafa</title>
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		<dc:creator>Zelda Zerafa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 23 Jan 2012 08:07:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks Larry for your reply. Actually, I have decided to get help from you with editing. So when I have the first 60 pages done (I&#039;m now at 35) I am going to buy some help from you and we can go over the manuscript. I think the hardest bit for me is writing good descriptions of a. the location in the scene b. the person who&#039;s talking c. the gestures the person makes as they speak and showing not telling what&#039;s going on in their head. I find that Tess Gerritsen does this very well. Damn, wish I know how she did it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks Larry for your reply. Actually, I have decided to get help from you with editing. So when I have the first 60 pages done (I&#8217;m now at 35) I am going to buy some help from you and we can go over the manuscript. I think the hardest bit for me is writing good descriptions of a. the location in the scene b. the person who&#8217;s talking c. the gestures the person makes as they speak and showing not telling what&#8217;s going on in their head. I find that Tess Gerritsen does this very well. Damn, wish I know how she did it.</p>
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		<title>By: Larry Brooks</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-78593</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry Brooks</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Jan 2012 15:43:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Zelda -- sounds like romantic suspense to me.  If you&#039;re pitching an agent, that should do the trick, it&#039;s their job to find the right publishers (not all romance house publish romantic suspense, and some publishers you wouldn&#039;t think of as romance house also publish it, with a &quot;tougher&quot; cover).

Either way, it&#039;s exciting to hear about your progress and hope for this, please keep us posted!  Wishing you every success.  L.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Zelda &#8212; sounds like romantic suspense to me.  If you&#8217;re pitching an agent, that should do the trick, it&#8217;s their job to find the right publishers (not all romance house publish romantic suspense, and some publishers you wouldn&#8217;t think of as romance house also publish it, with a &#8220;tougher&#8221; cover).</p>
<p>Either way, it&#8217;s exciting to hear about your progress and hope for this, please keep us posted!  Wishing you every success.  L.</p>
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		<title>By: Zelda Zerafa</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-78580</link>
		<dc:creator>Zelda Zerafa</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 22 Jan 2012 09:35:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry,

I have been following your blog for a few years and hope to complete my first novel this year. Actually, forget &#039;hope&#039;. I WILL finish my first novel this year. There, that&#039;s better.
I am having a hard time deciding on the genre the story fits in, and I need to know this to get guidelines about length and which agents to pitch to. It&#039;s a love story but it has crime and chases too. What do you think? I have an outline ready.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry,</p>
<p>I have been following your blog for a few years and hope to complete my first novel this year. Actually, forget &#8216;hope&#8217;. I WILL finish my first novel this year. There, that&#8217;s better.<br />
I am having a hard time deciding on the genre the story fits in, and I need to know this to get guidelines about length and which agents to pitch to. It&#8217;s a love story but it has crime and chases too. What do you think? I have an outline ready.</p>
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		<title>By: Katie Pietrak</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-76794</link>
		<dc:creator>Katie Pietrak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Dec 2011 16:20:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi!

My name is Katie and I&#039;m the owner of Vintage Vinyl Journals.  Love your site!  We&#039;re a company that makes eco-friendly handcrafted writing journals from upcycled recycled vintage albums.  They are made from environmentally friendly paper, recycled records and sleeves and are 100% made in the USA.  

I think your readers would love them!  They are great for music lovers and writers.

Please let me know if you want more info. 

Thank you for your time.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi!</p>
<p>My name is Katie and I&#8217;m the owner of Vintage Vinyl Journals.  Love your site!  We&#8217;re a company that makes eco-friendly handcrafted writing journals from upcycled recycled vintage albums.  They are made from environmentally friendly paper, recycled records and sleeves and are 100% made in the USA.  </p>
<p>I think your readers would love them!  They are great for music lovers and writers.</p>
<p>Please let me know if you want more info. </p>
<p>Thank you for your time.</p>
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		<title>By: Evonne M. Biggins</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-76728</link>
		<dc:creator>Evonne M. Biggins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Dec 2011 15:24:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, again, Larry.  Okay, I think I’ve got the first plot point figured out.  
On page 107 of 443, 24% on my Kindle---

In The Help, Missus Stein tells Eugenia she will read what Eugenia (Skeeter) writes about how the maids in Mississippi are treated.   Without that call, Skeeter may not have gone through witht the effort or danger of writing the book.  But, she decides to write the book despite the dangers to herself and the maids. = FPP.

So, when Missus Stein says that she will read what Eugenia writes, was that a FPP nudge? Or a pre-FPP hint?

Should there be a nudge or hint right before the FPP that tips the scale and gives the character a choice?  (Though, we writers know that the character has no choice :-)!

Thanks, again!  Evonne</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, again, Larry.  Okay, I think I’ve got the first plot point figured out.<br />
On page 107 of 443, 24% on my Kindle&#8212;</p>
<p>In The Help, Missus Stein tells Eugenia she will read what Eugenia (Skeeter) writes about how the maids in Mississippi are treated.   Without that call, Skeeter may not have gone through witht the effort or danger of writing the book.  But, she decides to write the book despite the dangers to herself and the maids. = FPP.</p>
<p>So, when Missus Stein says that she will read what Eugenia writes, was that a FPP nudge? Or a pre-FPP hint?</p>
<p>Should there be a nudge or hint right before the FPP that tips the scale and gives the character a choice?  (Though, we writers know that the character has no choice <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> !</p>
<p>Thanks, again!  Evonne</p>
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		<title>By: Eve Harris</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-2#comment-75584</link>
		<dc:creator>Eve Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 09 Dec 2011 03:32:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry, I discovered your website while I was doing Nano, and reading your articles about Story Structure really help me understand my writing better. I have a question about the plot points. I read a blog post by Janice Hardy about the difference in Main Character and Protagonist at her blog (http://blog.janicehardy.com/2009/05/main-event.html). 

Quote: &quot;In contrast, in Tom Clancy&#039;s Hunt for Red October, Jack Ryan stands out to me as the main character. The story revolves around him and his hunt, but he isn&#039;t the protagonist. Ramius is the one who&#039;s acting and driving the plot, because his choice and his actions set the entire story in motion. If you took Jack Ryan out of the story, Ramius would still act as he does. If you took Ramius out of the story, Ryan has nothing to do. But Ryan plays a vital role in balancing Ramius plot. We care abut Ramius because we care about Ryan.&quot;

So basically the answer to &quot;Whose story is this? (MC)&quot; and &quot;Who&#039;s the one driving the plot? (Protagonist)&quot; can be different. In that case, whose POV should I use to structure my story? Do I write the plot points based on the MC or the protagonist?

Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry, I discovered your website while I was doing Nano, and reading your articles about Story Structure really help me understand my writing better. I have a question about the plot points. I read a blog post by Janice Hardy about the difference in Main Character and Protagonist at her blog (<a href="http://blog.janicehardy.com/2009/05/main-event.html" rel="nofollow">http://blog.janicehardy.com/2009/05/main-event.html</a>). </p>
<p>Quote: &#8220;In contrast, in Tom Clancy&#8217;s Hunt for Red October, Jack Ryan stands out to me as the main character. The story revolves around him and his hunt, but he isn&#8217;t the protagonist. Ramius is the one who&#8217;s acting and driving the plot, because his choice and his actions set the entire story in motion. If you took Jack Ryan out of the story, Ramius would still act as he does. If you took Ramius out of the story, Ryan has nothing to do. But Ryan plays a vital role in balancing Ramius plot. We care abut Ramius because we care about Ryan.&#8221;</p>
<p>So basically the answer to &#8220;Whose story is this? (MC)&#8221; and &#8220;Who&#8217;s the one driving the plot? (Protagonist)&#8221; can be different. In that case, whose POV should I use to structure my story? Do I write the plot points based on the MC or the protagonist?</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Start Your Week Off Write: 5 Ways Writing a Novel Is Like Bread Pudding &#8211; plus 2 Recipes! &#124; kristin nador writes anywhere</title>
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		<dc:creator>Start Your Week Off Write: 5 Ways Writing a Novel Is Like Bread Pudding &#8211; plus 2 Recipes! &#124; kristin nador writes anywhere</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 05 Dec 2011 13:11:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] what you want to end up with when you finish the writing. Want to get a handle on story structure? Larry Brooks is Top Chef for story structure. Check out his eleven part blog series on structure [...]</description>
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		<title>By: NaNoWriMo Debriefing &#171; BULLISH INK</title>
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		<dc:creator>NaNoWriMo Debriefing &#171; BULLISH INK</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 02 Dec 2011 08:19:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Larry Brooks - his daily NaNo posts &#8211; based on his stellar story structure manual &#8211; were jam-packed with excellent advice and I truly applaud his generous spirit. You can buy his story structure book Story Engineering here or a compilation of his NaNo posts here [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Larry Brooks - his daily NaNo posts &#8211; based on his stellar story structure manual &#8211; were jam-packed with excellent advice and I truly applaud his generous spirit. You can buy his story structure book Story Engineering here or a compilation of his NaNo posts here [...]</p>
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