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		<title>By: Plot Brainstorming &#171; Steven K. Griffin</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-3903</link>
		<dc:creator>Plot Brainstorming &#171; Steven K. Griffin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 22 Jun 2010 14:02:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] story.  When creating the outlines, I repeatedly referenced and used the information provided by Larry Brooks at StoryFix.com.  He has an EXCELLENT series of posts on putting together the structure of a story [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] story.  When creating the outlines, I repeatedly referenced and used the information provided by Larry Brooks at StoryFix.com.  He has an EXCELLENT series of posts on putting together the structure of a story [...]</p>
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		<title>By: mark</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-3062</link>
		<dc:creator>mark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Apr 2010 16:39:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry,would now like to buy all 3 books,The Three Dimensions of CharacterStory Structure – Demystified&quot;,101 Slightly Unpredictable Tips  i live in London,are can&#039;t find on Amazon, whats best way,yes while back was going to,was undecided. 
Regards

Mark</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry,would now like to buy all 3 books,The Three Dimensions of CharacterStory Structure – Demystified&#8221;,101 Slightly Unpredictable Tips  i live in London,are can&#8217;t find on Amazon, whats best way,yes while back was going to,was undecided.<br />
Regards</p>
<p>Mark</p>
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		<title>By: mark</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-3059</link>
		<dc:creator>mark</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 14 Apr 2010 15:10:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry, So much to read on internet these dayz, but did read all of your points on hook and fpp, clear and concise, so will get your books to add too my collect.i&#039;m on a very tight deadline, to finish two full features, by end of April, and your points helped me see clearer, to ramping it upppppppp.

Regards

Mark</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry, So much to read on internet these dayz, but did read all of your points on hook and fpp, clear and concise, so will get your books to add too my collect.i&#8217;m on a very tight deadline, to finish two full features, by end of April, and your points helped me see clearer, to ramping it upppppppp.</p>
<p>Regards</p>
<p>Mark</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2521</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 24 Feb 2010 04:56:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cheesy.  Nice.  What do you gain by saying that?  If you have real feedback, I&#039;d like to know.  if my appearance bothers you (its hardly radical or certainly not pretentious, it&#039;s a freaking leather coat, dude, what do you wear, a Nehru jacket?).  Feedback please.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cheesy.  Nice.  What do you gain by saying that?  If you have real feedback, I&#8217;d like to know.  if my appearance bothers you (its hardly radical or certainly not pretentious, it&#8217;s a freaking leather coat, dude, what do you wear, a Nehru jacket?).  Feedback please.</p>
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		<title>By: Rick Weiss</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2395</link>
		<dc:creator>Rick Weiss</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2010 16:07:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, last month, I was a guest lecturer at a story structure workshop at my son&#039;s high school film class. We broke it down. Story structure feels forced and too theoretical when you first encounter it, so I then did a scene by scene exercise based on a short film I did for the class.  Wish I&#039;d had your breakdown of Avatar then, you could have been my whole lecture. Seriously, very well done and very helpful even to those of us who&#039;ve been at it for awhile. Avatar--the story, maybe not great art, but a great object lesson in how classical story structure delivers the goods. Love the blog.

rmw</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, last month, I was a guest lecturer at a story structure workshop at my son&#8217;s high school film class. We broke it down. Story structure feels forced and too theoretical when you first encounter it, so I then did a scene by scene exercise based on a short film I did for the class.  Wish I&#8217;d had your breakdown of Avatar then, you could have been my whole lecture. Seriously, very well done and very helpful even to those of us who&#8217;ve been at it for awhile. Avatar&#8211;the story, maybe not great art, but a great object lesson in how classical story structure delivers the goods. Love the blog.</p>
<p>rmw</p>
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		<title>By: Start with A Kiss and End With A Win. &#124; Cleavage by Kelly Diels.</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2371</link>
		<dc:creator>Start with A Kiss and End With A Win. &#124; Cleavage by Kelly Diels.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Feb 2010 06:22:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] it is like you&#8217;re me, only a more masculine, ruggedly handsome me who is also a &#8220;critically-acclaimed bestselling author of four psychological thrillers&#8220;. Ok, not me at all. [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] it is like you&#8217;re me, only a more masculine, ruggedly handsome me who is also a &#8220;critically-acclaimed bestselling author of four psychological thrillers&#8220;. Ok, not me at all. [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2097</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 15:26:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@DrB -- funny you shoul ask that.  I just did a guest post on Copyblogger.com on that very topic.  Here&#039;s the link, let me know if you have further questions.  Good luck!

http://www.copyblogger.com/blog-to-book-deal/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@DrB &#8212; funny you shoul ask that.  I just did a guest post on Copyblogger.com on that very topic.  Here&#8217;s the link, let me know if you have further questions.  Good luck!</p>
<p><a href="http://www.copyblogger.com/blog-to-book-deal/" rel="nofollow">http://www.copyblogger.com/blog-to-book-deal/</a></p>
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		<title>By: DrB</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2096</link>
		<dc:creator>DrB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 12 Jan 2010 14:49:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Do you have some advice on turning our site into a book? We have an outline and two sample chapters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Do you have some advice on turning our site into a book? We have an outline and two sample chapters.</p>
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		<title>By: Bill Morgan</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-2023</link>
		<dc:creator>Bill Morgan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Jan 2010 17:04:44 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m happy to have found your site.  I started my career blog in August, 2009 www.thejobswami.com   and am starting 2 e-books on finding jobs.

I&#039;ll be tuning into your advice and if you ever have workshops on the east coast I&#039;m all ears.

Bill Morgan
The Job Swami Career Advice Site</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m happy to have found your site.  I started my career blog in August, 2009 <a href="http://www.thejobswami.com" rel="nofollow">http://www.thejobswami.com</a>   and am starting 2 e-books on finding jobs.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll be tuning into your advice and if you ever have workshops on the east coast I&#8217;m all ears.</p>
<p>Bill Morgan<br />
The Job Swami Career Advice Site</p>
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		<title>By: Tanya Bimson</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/about/comment-page-1#comment-1552</link>
		<dc:creator>Tanya Bimson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Dec 2009 22:37:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry Brooks is one of the nicest men you will ever meet!  Buy whatever he is selling and you will be supporting someone who has put his whole heart and soul into the product.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry Brooks is one of the nicest men you will ever meet!  Buy whatever he is selling and you will be supporting someone who has put his whole heart and soul into the product.</p>
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