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		<title>By: Larry</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/breaking-in-breaking-out-and-just-plain-catching-a-break/comment-page-1#comment-3206</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 28 Apr 2010 16:10:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: what do my name mean?</title>
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		<dc:creator>what do my name mean?</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Apr 2010 22:09:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>man what is ur fb page</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>man what is ur fb page</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
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		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 27 Apr 2010 02:55:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Bubblecow -- I always hate to push back on a reader who has taken the time to write me, but here goes.  I agree completely with what you say, other than you observation that I missed it.  Read it again, you&#039;ll see what I mean... or maybe I wasn&#039;t clear.  The &quot;X-factor&quot; is, in fact, when one of the six core competencies is astoundingly well conceived and executed.  That&#039;s what it takes to break in and to break out, and that&#039;s precisely what the x-factor is... a writing voice that sings and sizzles... a concept nobody has seen before... an iconic character... a theme that redefines life itself... and (perhaps this is the one you meant), a level of integration and execution that is flawless and rare.

We&#039;re on the same page after all, I believe.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Bubblecow &#8212; I always hate to push back on a reader who has taken the time to write me, but here goes.  I agree completely with what you say, other than you observation that I missed it.  Read it again, you&#8217;ll see what I mean&#8230; or maybe I wasn&#8217;t clear.  The &#8220;X-factor&#8221; is, in fact, when one of the six core competencies is astoundingly well conceived and executed.  That&#8217;s what it takes to break in and to break out, and that&#8217;s precisely what the x-factor is&#8230; a writing voice that sings and sizzles&#8230; a concept nobody has seen before&#8230; an iconic character&#8230; a theme that redefines life itself&#8230; and (perhaps this is the one you meant), a level of integration and execution that is flawless and rare.</p>
<p>We&#8217;re on the same page after all, I believe.</p>
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		<title>By: BubbleCow</title>
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		<dc:creator>BubbleCow</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Apr 2010 05:50:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree with most of what you have written but you miss one important factor - the x factor. A break out book will have a factor that is beyond the story and the writing. It is impossible to put your finger on the x factor. The fact that US publishers paid a lot of cash for JK Rowling&#039;s first book, meant that they HAD to make it a success. Dan Brown&#039;s Da Vinci Code tapped into a of &#039;group&#039; thinking AND was always going to make a cracking film. I could go on...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree with most of what you have written but you miss one important factor &#8211; the x factor. A break out book will have a factor that is beyond the story and the writing. It is impossible to put your finger on the x factor. The fact that US publishers paid a lot of cash for JK Rowling&#8217;s first book, meant that they HAD to make it a success. Dan Brown&#8217;s Da Vinci Code tapped into a of &#8216;group&#8217; thinking AND was always going to make a cracking film. I could go on&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Curtis</title>
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		<dc:creator>Curtis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Apr 2010 23:05:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry.  
I didn&#039;t find FPP it found me.
Saw the ca. early 80s movie &quot; Wall Street&quot; last night.

An ah hah explosion and a half. 
 A single sentence of dialogue decided it. &quot; Yes, Mr Gekko. You have me.&quot; To break bad was decided. Until that moment there were a lot of parts and pieces of story. But, THE STORY started at that moment. 

I looked at my watch.  It was right on time. 75% of the movie to go.  Wild.

I am still excited about the find. The rest fell into place, like, well, clock work. 

 “Get Your Bad Self Published,”  I can&#039;t imagine half your audiance not going with that title.  If it&#039;s an ebook. Offer two titles if half the tribe prefers a different feel.  :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry.<br />
I didn&#8217;t find FPP it found me.<br />
Saw the ca. early 80s movie &#8221; Wall Street&#8221; last night.</p>
<p>An ah hah explosion and a half.<br />
 A single sentence of dialogue decided it. &#8221; Yes, Mr Gekko. You have me.&#8221; To break bad was decided. Until that moment there were a lot of parts and pieces of story. But, THE STORY started at that moment. </p>
<p>I looked at my watch.  It was right on time. 75% of the movie to go.  Wild.</p>
<p>I am still excited about the find. The rest fell into place, like, well, clock work. </p>
<p> “Get Your Bad Self Published,”  I can&#8217;t imagine half your audiance not going with that title.  If it&#8217;s an ebook. Offer two titles if half the tribe prefers a different feel.  <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Apr 2010 15:25:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cool. Reason I asked is I was making flow charts (mind map stuff) of the 6 core competencies so I could wrap my brain around a nice big graphical representation of everything you&#039;ve covered and I didn&#039;t have anything for the other 4 yet.

That title is bad-ass. Go with it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cool. Reason I asked is I was making flow charts (mind map stuff) of the 6 core competencies so I could wrap my brain around a nice big graphical representation of everything you&#8217;ve covered and I didn&#8217;t have anything for the other 4 yet.</p>
<p>That title is bad-ass. Go with it.</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
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		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Apr 2010 15:13:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Shane -- good morning, thanks for showing up.  Not a dumb question at all.   My 6CC book, &quot;Story Engineering: Mastering the Six Core Competencies of Sucessful Writing&quot; comes out next February from Writers Digest Books.  I know, a crazy-long lead time.  So it goes in New York.  Meanwhile, I hadn&#039;t really planned on doing a ebook on any of the others, though I&#039;ll continue to blog about each in more depth.  My next ebook is an expansion of an earlier series, &quot;Get Your Bad Self Published,&quot; which may be too hip for about half my audience, so I&#039;m still considering that as a title.  Ya think?

Thanks for all your support here, much appreciated.  Hope you feel better.  L.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Shane &#8212; good morning, thanks for showing up.  Not a dumb question at all.   My 6CC book, &#8220;Story Engineering: Mastering the Six Core Competencies of Sucessful Writing&#8221; comes out next February from Writers Digest Books.  I know, a crazy-long lead time.  So it goes in New York.  Meanwhile, I hadn&#8217;t really planned on doing a ebook on any of the others, though I&#8217;ll continue to blog about each in more depth.  My next ebook is an expansion of an earlier series, &#8220;Get Your Bad Self Published,&#8221; which may be too hip for about half my audience, so I&#8217;m still considering that as a title.  Ya think?</p>
<p>Thanks for all your support here, much appreciated.  Hope you feel better.  L.</p>
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		<title>By: Shane Arthur</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shane Arthur</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 16 Apr 2010 14:43:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey Larry, forgive me if this is a dumb question (I&quot;m sick today so my brain is slow), but you have the 6 core competencies: concept, character, theme, structure, scene construction and writing voice.

Your Story structure book deals with Structure
Your 3 dimension of Character deals with Character

Will you come out with individual books dealing with concept, theme, scene construction and writing voice? 
And, when is the 6 core competencies book out?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey Larry, forgive me if this is a dumb question (I&#8221;m sick today so my brain is slow), but you have the 6 core competencies: concept, character, theme, structure, scene construction and writing voice.</p>
<p>Your Story structure book deals with Structure<br />
Your 3 dimension of Character deals with Character</p>
<p>Will you come out with individual books dealing with concept, theme, scene construction and writing voice?<br />
And, when is the 6 core competencies book out?</p>
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