Comments on: Chapter 29 from “Bait and Switch” http://storyfix.com Novel Writing, Screenwriting and Storytelling Tips & Fundamentals Wed, 16 May 2012 23:16:12 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Ana Morgan http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-41050 Ana Morgan Sun, 26 Jun 2011 22:05:54 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-41050 Powerful scene, Larry. Halfway through Act 1? First plot point sh0uld be a doozy! Powerful scene, Larry. Halfway through Act 1? First plot point sh0uld be a doozy!

]]> By: Olga Oliver http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-40868 Olga Oliver Fri, 24 Jun 2011 19:55:01 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-40868 Larry, oh my! Devil he is, I feel his warm breath sliding across my cheek. I'll order at least 10 and I don't own a Kindle, but have friends who do. Good luck on your goal. And thanks again for your informative missiles that are tossing my story parts into tornadoic spins - like tossing a picture puzzles 30 feet into the air - but with each piece falling into a new place in the story's structure. I'm really encouraged. The ending of my first draft was flat, gasping and needy. Larry, oh my! Devil he is, I feel his warm breath sliding across my cheek. I’ll order at least 10 and I don’t own a Kindle, but have friends who do. Good luck on your goal. And thanks again for your informative missiles that are tossing my story parts into tornadoic spins – like tossing a picture puzzles 30 feet into the air – but with each piece falling into a new place in the story’s structure. I’m really encouraged. The ending of my first draft was flat, gasping and needy.

]]> By: Richard Dickerson http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-40835 Richard Dickerson Fri, 24 Jun 2011 12:32:24 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-40835 Larry. Pure genius! Thumbs up. Can't wait to read all of the saga. Larry. Pure genius! Thumbs up. Can’t wait to read all of the saga.

]]> By: “The Help” – Fighting the Good Fight in Part 3 http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-40792 “The Help” – Fighting the Good Fight in Part 3 Fri, 24 Jun 2011 02:45:50 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-40792 [...] You can read a mid-story sample chapter from the book HERE. [...] [...] You can read a mid-story sample chapter from the book HERE. [...]

]]> By: Misty Dietz http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-18293 Misty Dietz Fri, 04 Feb 2011 14:41:46 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-18293 Damn, Larry. He's a cool devil. That's good shit! :) Damn, Larry. He’s a cool devil. That’s good shit! :)

]]> By: The 102nd Killer Writing Tip http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-18153 The 102nd Killer Writing Tip Fri, 04 Feb 2011 02:05:14 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-18153 [...] HERE to read a chapter from my 2004 novel, “Bait and Switch” (named to Publisher’s Weekly “Best [...] [...] HERE to read a chapter from my 2004 novel, “Bait and Switch” (named to Publisher’s Weekly “Best [...]

]]> By: Trina http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-408 Trina Sun, 13 Sep 2009 09:46:31 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-408 Intriguing...surprising...suspenseful! Awesome! You do practice what you preach. I'm going to have to find this book and read it. It sounds good. Intriguing…surprising…suspenseful! Awesome! You do practice what you preach. I’m going to have to find this book and read it. It sounds good.

]]> By: David Clare http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-394 David Clare Thu, 10 Sep 2009 02:32:43 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-394 The saddest aspect about women requiring their "Dark Prince" is you *cannot* ever let up... or the attraction evaporates, and your emotional investment in the relationship is all for nothing. I have a new policy after my last breakup: nobody gets spanked for free. Takes too much time and energy, and if there's nothing in it for me, she can find someone else. I don't care about money... but I do want the investment returned. The saddest aspect about women requiring their “Dark Prince” is you *cannot* ever let up… or the attraction evaporates, and your emotional investment in the relationship is all for nothing.

I have a new policy after my last breakup: nobody gets spanked for free. Takes too much time and energy, and if there’s nothing in it for me, she can find someone else. I don’t care about money… but I do want the investment returned.

]]> By: Beverly Rowe http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-391 Beverly Rowe Wed, 09 Sep 2009 22:52:14 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-391 Oh, my! The only book of yours that I don't have....but, you hooked me....Amazon, here I come. Oh, my! The only book of yours that I don’t have….but, you hooked me….Amazon, here I come.

]]> By: J.Morgan http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-390 J.Morgan Wed, 09 Sep 2009 19:43:06 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-390 Ouch! Wow, well....wow. Can't think of anything else. Ouch! Wow, well….wow.

Can’t think of anything else.

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