Comments on: Chapter 29 from “Bait and Switch” http://storyfix.com Novel Writing Tips & Fundamentals - Storyfix.com Thu, 29 Jul 2010 12:15:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Trina http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-408 Trina Sun, 13 Sep 2009 09:46:31 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-408 Intriguing...surprising...suspenseful! Awesome! You do practice what you preach. I'm going to have to find this book and read it. It sounds good. Intriguing…surprising…suspenseful! Awesome! You do practice what you preach. I’m going to have to find this book and read it. It sounds good.

]]> By: David Clare http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-394 David Clare Thu, 10 Sep 2009 02:32:43 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-394 The saddest aspect about women requiring their "Dark Prince" is you *cannot* ever let up... or the attraction evaporates, and your emotional investment in the relationship is all for nothing. I have a new policy after my last breakup: nobody gets spanked for free. Takes too much time and energy, and if there's nothing in it for me, she can find someone else. I don't care about money... but I do want the investment returned. The saddest aspect about women requiring their “Dark Prince” is you *cannot* ever let up… or the attraction evaporates, and your emotional investment in the relationship is all for nothing.

I have a new policy after my last breakup: nobody gets spanked for free. Takes too much time and energy, and if there’s nothing in it for me, she can find someone else. I don’t care about money… but I do want the investment returned.

]]> By: Beverly Rowe http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-391 Beverly Rowe Wed, 09 Sep 2009 22:52:14 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-391 Oh, my! The only book of yours that I don't have....but, you hooked me....Amazon, here I come. Oh, my! The only book of yours that I don’t have….but, you hooked me….Amazon, here I come.

]]> By: J.Morgan http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-390 J.Morgan Wed, 09 Sep 2009 19:43:06 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-390 Ouch! Wow, well....wow. Can't think of anything else. Ouch! Wow, well….wow.

Can’t think of anything else.

]]> By: Scene Writing: One Writer, Two Killer Examples http://storyfix.com/chapter-29-from-bait-and-switch/comment-page-1#comment-387 Scene Writing: One Writer, Two Killer Examples Wed, 09 Sep 2009 12:44:59 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?page_id=985#comment-387 [...] You can read Chapter 29 of Bait and Switch in its entirety HERE. [...] [...] You can read Chapter 29 of Bait and Switch in its entirety HERE. [...]

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