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		<title>By: Words on the craft of writing&#160;&#124;&#160;Zero Rich Party Links</title>
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		<dc:creator>Words on the craft of writing&#160;&#124;&#160;Zero Rich Party Links</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 01 Apr 2010 13:59:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] been writing a great series on what elevates a story to greatness. In his first post, he discusses empowering ways to think about your story; the second is about the power of &#8220;arena;&#8221; the third, taking the reader for the ride of [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] been writing a great series on what elevates a story to greatness. In his first post, he discusses empowering ways to think about your story; the second is about the power of &#8220;arena;&#8221; the third, taking the reader for the ride of [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Steve</title>
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		<dc:creator>Steve</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 19 Mar 2010 03:18:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mundane is the building across the street where Tim works as a low level stock broker just out of college.  

Arena is where the building is a battleship on a collision course with an old pirate ship, across a hundred yards of shark infested heat waves eating up the helpless, innocent cars and pedestrians below.  Tim the parrot-less pirate, escaped the deadly streets and has no sympathy for those less fortunate ones.  He&#039;s got bigger fish to fry.

Ok not entirely original (inspired by a Monty Python concept), but it can be the &quot;here and now and ordinary&quot; but seen in a new way.  

Am I right?

By the way, I could only hope to have one tenth the courage of Pat Tillman.  God bless him.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mundane is the building across the street where Tim works as a low level stock broker just out of college.  </p>
<p>Arena is where the building is a battleship on a collision course with an old pirate ship, across a hundred yards of shark infested heat waves eating up the helpless, innocent cars and pedestrians below.  Tim the parrot-less pirate, escaped the deadly streets and has no sympathy for those less fortunate ones.  He&#8217;s got bigger fish to fry.</p>
<p>Ok not entirely original (inspired by a Monty Python concept), but it can be the &#8220;here and now and ordinary&#8221; but seen in a new way.  </p>
<p>Am I right?</p>
<p>By the way, I could only hope to have one tenth the courage of Pat Tillman.  God bless him.</p>
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		<title>By: janice &#124;Sharing the Journey</title>
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		<dc:creator>janice &#124;Sharing the Journey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 18 Mar 2010 15:04:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Praise be - someone brave enough to mention the importance of sensibility, as well as the following, which I loved,  from this post&#039;s sibling:

&quot;Writing voice isn’t as much a function of thinking as it is something that eludes definition and therefore assimilation.  The more artful flavors of prose are more often a function of intuition and imitation fused with heart and wit and delivered with a strong does of lyric sensibility.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Praise be &#8211; someone brave enough to mention the importance of sensibility, as well as the following, which I loved,  from this post&#8217;s sibling:</p>
<p>&#8220;Writing voice isn’t as much a function of thinking as it is something that eludes definition and therefore assimilation.  The more artful flavors of prose are more often a function of intuition and imitation fused with heart and wit and delivered with a strong does of lyric sensibility.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: nancy</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/empowering-ways-to-%e2%80%9cthink%e2%80%9d-about-your-story/comment-page-1#comment-2739</link>
		<dc:creator>nancy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 16:48:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry!  I want to order your books, but I&#039;m in Rome and do not want to use my credit card on a hotel computer.  I had already left when you made the first offer.  I&#039;ll be home this weekend. Is there anyway I can get in on this deal this weekend?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry!  I want to order your books, but I&#8217;m in Rome and do not want to use my credit card on a hotel computer.  I had already left when you made the first offer.  I&#8217;ll be home this weekend. Is there anyway I can get in on this deal this weekend?</p>
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		<title>By: Natalie</title>
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		<dc:creator>Natalie</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 15:47:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD! GLORY!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>THIS IS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD! GLORY!</p>
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		<title>By: Colleen Shine Phillips</title>
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		<dc:creator>Colleen Shine Phillips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 15:06:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thinking outside the box is something that always intrigues me. Not just for the sake of doing it, for the sake of being different, but because it is uncharted territory. I hope you have insights into this. I look forward to it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thinking outside the box is something that always intrigues me. Not just for the sake of doing it, for the sake of being different, but because it is uncharted territory. I hope you have insights into this. I look forward to it.</p>
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		<title>By: Gwen Hernandez</title>
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		<dc:creator>Gwen Hernandez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 13:31:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Can&#039;t wait to hear more!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Can&#8217;t wait to hear more!</p>
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		<title>By: Shirls</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shirls</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 11:30:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just received a text to say my copy of Whisper will be here tomorrow! I hereby give myself permission to stop thinking about my story until I have devoured it whole.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just received a text to say my copy of Whisper will be here tomorrow! I hereby give myself permission to stop thinking about my story until I have devoured it whole.</p>
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		<title>By: Bruce H. Johnson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bruce H. Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 16 Mar 2010 06:38:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Definitely looking forward to the rest of this.

Guys, get your Six Core Competencies up to the virtuoso level. Crank your concept higher than the stars. That&#039;s a good start; we may get to be competent writers that way.

Now we wait for Larry to reveal the next step.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Definitely looking forward to the rest of this.</p>
<p>Guys, get your Six Core Competencies up to the virtuoso level. Crank your concept higher than the stars. That&#8217;s a good start; we may get to be competent writers that way.</p>
<p>Now we wait for Larry to reveal the next step.</p>
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