http://storyfix.com/fatal-distractions-six-things-that-will-tank-your-story-every-time Novel Writing Tips & Fundamentals - Storyfix.com Thu, 29 Jul 2010 12:15:20 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://storyfix.com/fatal-distractions-six-things-that-will-tank-your-story-every-time/comment-page-1#comment-47 Billie Sun, 28 Jun 2009 19:56:10 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=266#comment-47 Very enlightening - I think I've been able to paper a whole living room w/ rejections- but it's getting better and I'm sure your tips will help. Dangerous all of them the flaws that sparked them I mean. Thanks Billie Very enlightening – I think I’ve been able to paper a whole living room w/ rejections- but it’s getting better and I’m sure your tips will help. Dangerous all of them the flaws that sparked them I mean.
Thanks
Billie

]]> http://storyfix.com/fatal-distractions-six-things-that-will-tank-your-story-every-time/comment-page-1#comment-46 Larry Sun, 28 Jun 2009 01:32:54 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=266#comment-46 That would have been great, but it wasn't written that way. In fact, that's precisely the advice I gave her -- make the woman the hero instead of the guy in jail. We're on the same page here. Literally and figuratively. Thanks for commenting. That would have been great, but it wasn’t written that way. In fact, that’s precisely the advice I gave her — make the woman the hero instead of the guy in jail. We’re on the same page here. Literally and figuratively. Thanks for commenting.

]]> http://storyfix.com/fatal-distractions-six-things-that-will-tank-your-story-every-time/comment-page-1#comment-45 blank Sat, 27 Jun 2009 15:33:09 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=266#comment-45 In #1, perhaps the book was about the female hero? Hm? In #1, perhaps the book was about the female hero? Hm?

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