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		<title>By: Top Ten Storyfix Posts of 2009</title>
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		<dc:creator>Top Ten Storyfix Posts of 2009</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Dec 2009 21:21:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] 10.     Get Published, Part 6 &#8212; Avoiding the Common Pitfalls [...]</description>
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		<title>By: jurgen wolff</title>
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		<dc:creator>jurgen wolff</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2009 15:46:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great points--and in novels we can&#039;t fall back on 3-D to distract people from the story in the story or clunky dialogue...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great points&#8211;and in novels we can&#8217;t fall back on 3-D to distract people from the story in the story or clunky dialogue&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Chris</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/get-published-part-6-%e2%80%93-avoiding-the-common-pitfalls/comment-page-1#comment-1751</link>
		<dc:creator>Chris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2009 08:47:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry,

I&#039;m always appreciative of the advice and guidelines you offer, whether they are refreshers or new concepts, they always help.

Take Care,
Chris</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry,</p>
<p>I&#8217;m always appreciative of the advice and guidelines you offer, whether they are refreshers or new concepts, they always help.</p>
<p>Take Care,<br />
Chris</p>
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		<title>By: Story is key &#171; Day By Day Writer</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/get-published-part-6-%e2%80%93-avoiding-the-common-pitfalls/comment-page-1#comment-1747</link>
		<dc:creator>Story is key &#171; Day By Day Writer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2009 03:51:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] found a great post on Larry Brooks&#8217; Storyfix.com today, Get Published, Part 6&#8211;Avoid the Common Pitfalls. Brooks offers up six problems that get a manuscript a quick rejection, but the best part of the [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] found a great post on Larry Brooks&#8217; Storyfix.com today, Get Published, Part 6&#8211;Avoid the Common Pitfalls. Brooks offers up six problems that get a manuscript a quick rejection, but the best part of the [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Luisa Perkins</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/get-published-part-6-%e2%80%93-avoiding-the-common-pitfalls/comment-page-1#comment-1743</link>
		<dc:creator>Luisa Perkins</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2009 23:38:45 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>This post is one of your best; that opening analogy is so powerful for me.  A day with a storyfix post is an energized writing day for me.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This post is one of your best; that opening analogy is so powerful for me.  A day with a storyfix post is an energized writing day for me.</p>
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		<title>By: Guest Posts, An Endorsement, A Major Announcement and a Little Kink&#8230; Not Necessarily in That Order</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/get-published-part-6-%e2%80%93-avoiding-the-common-pitfalls/comment-page-1#comment-1735</link>
		<dc:creator>Guest Posts, An Endorsement, A Major Announcement and a Little Kink&#8230; Not Necessarily in That Order</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2009 21:10:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] would appreciate hearing any feedback you may have on this series.  The last entry &#8212; Part 6: Avoiding the Common Pitfalls (see below) &#8212; was one of the best posts yet on Storyfix, in my very unobjective opinion.  [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] would appreciate hearing any feedback you may have on this series.  The last entry &#8212; Part 6: Avoiding the Common Pitfalls (see below) &#8212; was one of the best posts yet on Storyfix, in my very unobjective opinion.  [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Jenny</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jenny</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2009 14:02:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry, great post again over at Kelly Diels. I look forward to reading more by you since a major goal of mine for 2010 is to write and sell an ebook on my site. I think my favorite part of this post was that you said &quot;sex without an orgasm is not going to get you a *SECOND* date.&quot; Love that.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry, great post again over at Kelly Diels. I look forward to reading more by you since a major goal of mine for 2010 is to write and sell an ebook on my site. I think my favorite part of this post was that you said &#8220;sex without an orgasm is not going to get you a *SECOND* date.&#8221; Love that.</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
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		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Dec 2009 18:11:12 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Pegg -- hi Pegg... good question.  Sorry for the slang.  Pedestrian writing is &quot;amateur&quot; writing.  Not bad, but not what a professional would do.  Everybody writes, but a pro sounds, well, more polished.  The term derives from a &quot;man/woman on the street&quot; analogy -- if you just picked someone at random and asked them to write something for you, chances are it would be legible, but probably not all that professional.  

Hope this clarifies.  It&#039;s not a put-down to anyone, just a term to separate the professional writer&#039;s expectations from those of the masses.  If everyone wrote at the same level, nobody would pay us for our words.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Pegg &#8212; hi Pegg&#8230; good question.  Sorry for the slang.  Pedestrian writing is &#8220;amateur&#8221; writing.  Not bad, but not what a professional would do.  Everybody writes, but a pro sounds, well, more polished.  The term derives from a &#8220;man/woman on the street&#8221; analogy &#8212; if you just picked someone at random and asked them to write something for you, chances are it would be legible, but probably not all that professional.  </p>
<p>Hope this clarifies.  It&#8217;s not a put-down to anyone, just a term to separate the professional writer&#8217;s expectations from those of the masses.  If everyone wrote at the same level, nobody would pay us for our words.</p>
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		<title>By: Pegg Thomas</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pegg Thomas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 17 Dec 2009 18:00:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>So what is pedestrian writing?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>So what is pedestrian writing?</p>
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