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		<title>By: Mae</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/i-suck-let-me-make-it-up-to-you/comment-page-1#comment-2795</link>
		<dc:creator>Mae</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 21 Mar 2010 17:08:20 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi Larry,  I bought the structuring  e-book.  Love it.  Will change my writing. You sent me the character e-book too, but I must have deleted it thinking it was an e-mail.. Can you send it back to me? Stupid of me.....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Larry,  I bought the structuring  e-book.  Love it.  Will change my writing. You sent me the character e-book too, but I must have deleted it thinking it was an e-mail.. Can you send it back to me? Stupid of me&#8230;..</p>
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		<title>By: 7 Hours Left on Two-for-One ebook deal!</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/i-suck-let-me-make-it-up-to-you/comment-page-1#comment-2729</link>
		<dc:creator>7 Hours Left on Two-for-One ebook deal!</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Mar 2010 23:43:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] HERE to learn more and then grab yours, or just do it from this page &#8211; buy either &#8220;Story [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] HERE to learn more and then grab yours, or just do it from this page &#8211; buy either &#8220;Story [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Monica</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/i-suck-let-me-make-it-up-to-you/comment-page-1#comment-2605</link>
		<dc:creator>Monica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 05 Mar 2010 17:50:13 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Another great post! I think I&#039;ll have to go into the archives and start reading those.

These questions will undoubtedly help me focus with my WIP, which is giving me a wee bit of trouble in revising. Despite planning out before hand, Pt 2 &amp; 3 just seem boring. It needs a subplot, more conflict! Ack! I&#039;m doing a lot of character work, with Larry&#039;s &quot;Single most powerful writing tool&quot; beside me. I may have to use this one too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Another great post! I think I&#8217;ll have to go into the archives and start reading those.</p>
<p>These questions will undoubtedly help me focus with my WIP, which is giving me a wee bit of trouble in revising. Despite planning out before hand, Pt 2 &amp; 3 just seem boring. It needs a subplot, more conflict! Ack! I&#8217;m doing a lot of character work, with Larry&#8217;s &#8220;Single most powerful writing tool&#8221; beside me. I may have to use this one too.</p>
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		<title>By: Brian</title>
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		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Mar 2010 19:29:43 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Heh, I should have waited a week before buying. Oh well, the Story Structure book is definitely worth the money all by itself. Thanks for all you do, and good luck with the new book!

Brian</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Heh, I should have waited a week before buying. Oh well, the Story Structure book is definitely worth the money all by itself. Thanks for all you do, and good luck with the new book!</p>
<p>Brian</p>
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		<title>By: janice &#124; Sharing the Journey</title>
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		<dc:creator>janice &#124; Sharing the Journey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Mar 2010 18:25:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I really enjoyed this and had a go at tweeting it. SO much good stuff in their about the importance of empathy and understanding the reader&#039;s needs and the ride you take them on. A good book leaves me with an afterglow, a sense memory of all I shared as I read the book. A good TV series leaves me bereft when it ends.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I really enjoyed this and had a go at tweeting it. SO much good stuff in their about the importance of empathy and understanding the reader&#8217;s needs and the ride you take them on. A good book leaves me with an afterglow, a sense memory of all I shared as I read the book. A good TV series leaves me bereft when it ends.</p>
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		<title>By: Shirls</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shirls</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Mar 2010 06:31:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, you have been so generous with your content on Story Fix that everyone understands your need to concentrate on your 6CC deadline right now. Personally I can&#039;t wait for it to be published so the more you cram the better.
Anyway I don&#039;t recall seeing the post above in July - I must have subscribed later and missed it in the archives. So thanks very much.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, you have been so generous with your content on Story Fix that everyone understands your need to concentrate on your 6CC deadline right now. Personally I can&#8217;t wait for it to be published so the more you cram the better.<br />
Anyway I don&#8217;t recall seeing the post above in July &#8211; I must have subscribed later and missed it in the archives. So thanks very much.</p>
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