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	<title>Comments on: Let Me Fix Your Story… Before Someone Kills It</title>
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		<title>By: Sandra</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/let-me-fix-your-story%e2%80%a6-before-someone-kills-it/comment-page-1#comment-1979</link>
		<dc:creator>Sandra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Dec 2009 21:58:30 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have an idea, a new idea, that I will be working up soon - actually, I may let it simmer and wait for your group forum coaching thingy ;-)  But whether I wait for that or get going on it on my own sooner, it will be a long wait before I&#039;d have $400. If the offer is limited time, then I&#039;ll be missing it. If it isn&#039;t, you&#039;ll be getting my stuff when the money is saved up if I think your coaching style will work for me. :-)

I would also like to review your Sample Coaching Documents.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have an idea, a new idea, that I will be working up soon &#8211; actually, I may let it simmer and wait for your group forum coaching thingy <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';-)' class='wp-smiley' />   But whether I wait for that or get going on it on my own sooner, it will be a long wait before I&#8217;d have $400. If the offer is limited time, then I&#8217;ll be missing it. If it isn&#8217;t, you&#8217;ll be getting my stuff when the money is saved up if I think your coaching style will work for me. <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
<p>I would also like to review your Sample Coaching Documents.</p>
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		<title>By: Adam</title>
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		<dc:creator>Adam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 30 Dec 2009 14:49:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>i&#039;d love to get coached up, but it will take me some time to save up the funds (that and convince my wife that it&#039;s worth it).  This type of coaching is something i think aspiring writers could use more than anything, but there are few who offer this type of service.

i&#039;d like to take a peek at your sample coaching documents, so let me know what i need to do to make that happen.

Thanks for this offer, and i hope it turns out well for you as well as the ones you coach.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i&#8217;d love to get coached up, but it will take me some time to save up the funds (that and convince my wife that it&#8217;s worth it).  This type of coaching is something i think aspiring writers could use more than anything, but there are few who offer this type of service.</p>
<p>i&#8217;d like to take a peek at your sample coaching documents, so let me know what i need to do to make that happen.</p>
<p>Thanks for this offer, and i hope it turns out well for you as well as the ones you coach.</p>
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