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		<title>By: dandellion</title>
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		<dc:creator>dandellion</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 19:27:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Happy birthday!

And second honeymoon makes you forgiven for being late. Take your time and enjoy. Writers shouldn&#039;t be exposed to needless stress.</description>
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<p>And second honeymoon makes you forgiven for being late. Take your time and enjoy. Writers shouldn&#8217;t be exposed to needless stress.</p>
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		<title>By: Deanna Schrayer</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/make-that-monday/comment-page-1#comment-3882</link>
		<dc:creator>Deanna Schrayer</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Jun 2010 06:23:02 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, first an FYI - I steered clear of the An Education posts because I haven&#039;t had the chance to see or read it yet. I&#039;ll come back to those when I do. 

Meanwhile, if I were your wife, I&#039;m not so sure I&#039;d be your wife any longer if you were even thinking of posting while on a second honeymoon. :) And good grief, with all that other stuff going on, you deserve a break! 

I hope you&#039;ve enjoyed Maui, and I look forward to Monday&#039;s post - as others have said, you really know how to hook your readers! Oh, and happy birthday!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, first an FYI &#8211; I steered clear of the An Education posts because I haven&#8217;t had the chance to see or read it yet. I&#8217;ll come back to those when I do. </p>
<p>Meanwhile, if I were your wife, I&#8217;m not so sure I&#8217;d be your wife any longer if you were even thinking of posting while on a second honeymoon. <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' />  And good grief, with all that other stuff going on, you deserve a break! </p>
<p>I hope you&#8217;ve enjoyed Maui, and I look forward to Monday&#8217;s post &#8211; as others have said, you really know how to hook your readers! Oh, and happy birthday!</p>
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		<title>By: Deb Dorchak</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/make-that-monday/comment-page-1#comment-3878</link>
		<dc:creator>Deb Dorchak</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 17:00:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, Larry, Larry...join you in Maui? Of course. Oh, wait, you meant join you here. Ok, need more coffee. Pass the Kona, would you?

You know what? Don&#039;t worry about it. Second honeymoons are far more important. No one&#039;s going to tie you to the stake for missing a post. Haven&#039;t you learned anything from the Hawaiians? Aloha is what it&#039;s all about. If you take anything away from paradise, make sure you take time out to watch the sunset every night.

And in the spirit of aloha; happy birthday and congrats on the house offer. I can&#039;t offer any kind of condolences on the security lines - the last time I was in Maui was pre-911. 

Mahalo, cuz!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, Larry, Larry&#8230;join you in Maui? Of course. Oh, wait, you meant join you here. Ok, need more coffee. Pass the Kona, would you?</p>
<p>You know what? Don&#8217;t worry about it. Second honeymoons are far more important. No one&#8217;s going to tie you to the stake for missing a post. Haven&#8217;t you learned anything from the Hawaiians? Aloha is what it&#8217;s all about. If you take anything away from paradise, make sure you take time out to watch the sunset every night.</p>
<p>And in the spirit of aloha; happy birthday and congrats on the house offer. I can&#8217;t offer any kind of condolences on the security lines &#8211; the last time I was in Maui was pre-911. </p>
<p>Mahalo, cuz!</p>
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		<title>By: Martha Miller</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/make-that-monday/comment-page-1#comment-3877</link>
		<dc:creator>Martha Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 16:34:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Happy birthday, happy second honeymoon, and break a leg on the house sale!  We don&#039;t care if your post is a tad late this time. You have a life.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Happy birthday, happy second honeymoon, and break a leg on the house sale!  We don&#8217;t care if your post is a tad late this time. You have a life.</p>
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		<title>By: Kelly</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/make-that-monday/comment-page-1#comment-3876</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 15:54:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mmm, Larry.
Still jealous. See you on the flip flop.
Aloha, Kelly</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mmm, Larry.<br />
Still jealous. See you on the flip flop.<br />
Aloha, Kelly</p>
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		<title>By: Elizabeth</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/make-that-monday/comment-page-1#comment-3875</link>
		<dc:creator>Elizabeth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 15:52:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Must admit, these past 3 entries have shown how to keep the reader on the edge of her seat! -- &quot;I&#039;m in Maui&quot;, &quot;My website crashed&quot;, &quot;I&#039;ll post a mind-blowing blog later today!&quot;, &quot;I got sick&quot;, &quot;We&#039;re selling our house&quot;, &quot;Haven&#039;t posted that entry yet, but it&#039;s coming!&quot;, &quot;Schedule looks bad&quot;, &quot;We&#039;re on a second honeymoon - and it&#039;s my birthday&quot;, &quot;Will post that killer entry on Monday!&quot;  Alright, alright -- I&#039;m hooked!  lol</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Must admit, these past 3 entries have shown how to keep the reader on the edge of her seat! &#8212; &#8220;I&#8217;m in Maui&#8221;, &#8220;My website crashed&#8221;, &#8220;I&#8217;ll post a mind-blowing blog later today!&#8221;, &#8220;I got sick&#8221;, &#8220;We&#8217;re selling our house&#8221;, &#8220;Haven&#8217;t posted that entry yet, but it&#8217;s coming!&#8221;, &#8220;Schedule looks bad&#8221;, &#8220;We&#8217;re on a second honeymoon &#8211; and it&#8217;s my birthday&#8221;, &#8220;Will post that killer entry on Monday!&#8221;  Alright, alright &#8212; I&#8217;m hooked!  lol</p>
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		<title>By: Jen</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jen</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 19 Jun 2010 15:16:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The fact that you even thought you could get a post up while in Hawaii counts for at least 3 actual posts in my book.  That&#039;s dedication!  Good luck on selling the house!  And happy birthday!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The fact that you even thought you could get a post up while in Hawaii counts for at least 3 actual posts in my book.  That&#8217;s dedication!  Good luck on selling the house!  And happy birthday!</p>
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