Comments on: More Inciting Incident… and Stuff http://storyfix.com/more-inciting-incident%e2%80%a6-and-stuff Novel Writing, Screenwriting and Storytelling Tips & Fundamentals Tue, 07 Feb 2012 01:42:20 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Susan Gregory http://storyfix.com/more-inciting-incident%e2%80%a6-and-stuff/comment-page-1#comment-3930 Susan Gregory Mon, 28 Jun 2010 02:10:09 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=2777#comment-3930 Question: Can the FPP set into motion an event yet unknown to the protagonist? The protagonist would be unaware that the FPP has occurred and the changes/challenges are barrelling towards him. Question: Can the FPP set into motion an event yet unknown to the protagonist? The protagonist would be unaware that the FPP has occurred and the changes/challenges are barrelling towards him.

]]> By: Deanna Schrayer http://storyfix.com/more-inciting-incident%e2%80%a6-and-stuff/comment-page-1#comment-3921 Deanna Schrayer Fri, 25 Jun 2010 13:06:03 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=2777#comment-3921 Larry, this is exactly why I cannot stand to watch such movies. And, as good an actor as Cruise is, this isn't the only one he's done that's so...messy, (which you noted). Thanks so much for these posts. They've been very helpful for me while writing my first novel. Larry, this is exactly why I cannot stand to watch such movies. And, as good an actor as Cruise is, this isn’t the only one he’s done that’s so…messy, (which you noted).

Thanks so much for these posts. They’ve been very helpful for me while writing my first novel.

]]> By: Kelly http://storyfix.com/more-inciting-incident%e2%80%a6-and-stuff/comment-page-1#comment-3919 Kelly Fri, 25 Jun 2010 03:58:29 +0000 http://storyfix.com/?p=2777#comment-3919 Mmm, Larry. Don't the movie people have "people" that are supposed to keep the reality factor on track? The movie sounds totally derailed by visual bloopers. Maybe I'll see it on "Recession Tuesday" at the theater, when tickets are two for one and popcorn is a dollar... Thanks-- Kelly Mmm, Larry.
Don’t the movie people have “people” that are supposed to keep the reality factor on track? The movie sounds totally derailed by visual bloopers.
Maybe I’ll see it on “Recession Tuesday” at the theater, when tickets are two for one and popcorn is a dollar…
Thanks– Kelly

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