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	<title>Comments on: Part 2 &#8212; How to Cut Your Manuscript by 20% or More</title>
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		<title>By: Sarah</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sarah</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 01 Sep 2009 16:08:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you! This is a great post, and I can already see a lot of jiggly, wiggly fat that needs to be cut from the first scene of my WIP. Fantastic.
Also- the concept of writing a bunch of shorter scenes, say 1K-1.5K, is very appealing and revelatory to me. Keep up the excellent work!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you! This is a great post, and I can already see a lot of jiggly, wiggly fat that needs to be cut from the first scene of my WIP. Fantastic.<br />
Also- the concept of writing a bunch of shorter scenes, say 1K-1.5K, is very appealing and revelatory to me. Keep up the excellent work!</p>
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		<title>By: Mary E. Ulrich</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary E. Ulrich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 Aug 2009 15:58:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, I have the opposite problem. An editor told me my story was too short and though she loved it, she suggested I triple the word count so it would be more in the 70-90,000 range for a good romance. Hope you do a post on that sometime. Thanks. Mary</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, I have the opposite problem. An editor told me my story was too short and though she loved it, she suggested I triple the word count so it would be more in the 70-90,000 range for a good romance. Hope you do a post on that sometime. Thanks. Mary</p>
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		<title>By: Kait Nolan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kait Nolan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 20 Aug 2009 14:30:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post as usual.  Oh, I just wanted to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the Kreativ Blogger award!  http://kaitnolan.com/2009/08/20/kreativ-award/ Keep up the great work!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post as usual.  Oh, I just wanted to let you know that I’ve nominated you for the Kreativ Blogger award!  <a href="http://kaitnolan.com/2009/08/20/kreativ-award/" rel="nofollow">http://kaitnolan.com/2009/08/20/kreativ-award/</a> Keep up the great work!</p>
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