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	<title>Comments on: Part 4: Characterization – How to Make Your Readers Love ‘em Instead of Leave ‘em</title>
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		<title>By: Dane</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 18:23:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great stuff Larry.  Thanks for this series.  I can&#039;t believe how much has broken loose for me in my writing since a friend pointed me to your site.

I&#039;ve been at a block with a manuscript I&#039;m working on because the backstory is jamming me up.  I can&#039;t figure out how to get enough in there for things to come clear without an information dump.  So this is of particular interest to me.

Thanks again.  I love your site and the information you&#039;ve shared.  I really appreciate it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great stuff Larry.  Thanks for this series.  I can&#8217;t believe how much has broken loose for me in my writing since a friend pointed me to your site.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve been at a block with a manuscript I&#8217;m working on because the backstory is jamming me up.  I can&#8217;t figure out how to get enough in there for things to come clear without an information dump.  So this is of particular interest to me.</p>
<p>Thanks again.  I love your site and the information you&#8217;ve shared.  I really appreciate it.</p>
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		<title>By: poch</title>
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		<dc:creator>poch</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 20 Sep 2009 14:25:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&#039;Here’s the primary guideline, called the “iceberg principle” – show only ten percent of your character’s backstory.   Literally.  Show enough to allow the reader to glean and make assumptions about what remains unseen.&#039;

I remember a blogging expert&#039;s advice:
&#039;Treat your readers like dogs and give only bits by bits.&#039;
This may sound harsh but really not unethical.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&#8216;Here’s the primary guideline, called the “iceberg principle” – show only ten percent of your character’s backstory.   Literally.  Show enough to allow the reader to glean and make assumptions about what remains unseen.&#8217;</p>
<p>I remember a blogging expert&#8217;s advice:<br />
&#8216;Treat your readers like dogs and give only bits by bits.&#8217;<br />
This may sound harsh but really not unethical.</p>
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