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	<title>Comments on: Story Structure: A Kinder, Gentler First Plot Point</title>
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		<title>By: Your First Plot Point &#124; Javen Blog</title>
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		<dc:creator>Your First Plot Point &#124; Javen Blog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 11:18:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>By: Mike</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mike</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 07 Sep 2009 04:27:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, I want to thank you.

I started my first serious writing effort in May with huge anticipation, only to fizzle out at the beginning of July after realizing I hadn&#039;t nailed down what you revealed in this article.

At the beginning I thought I had a good over-arching idea of how my story would begin, progress, and conclude. The plot, subsequent twists, the antagonists, protagonists, sub-plots, relationships, romances, and rivalries, but I still felt something was missing. 

And then I read this article. Somewhere in the back of my subconsicous, there was a dim bulb I knew existed, but I could never find the rope to flick it on, being in a dark corner without a form; a definition.

The first plot point. Since you called it by its name and helped me understand it better, my story which I slowly lost hope on has what I believe is the formation of a complete FPP.

I&#039;ll be applying what I learn from your blog to my efforts and try to knit everything together again, from where I left off. Giving serious consideration to getting your 101 tips book too. Another resource never hurt one&#039;s efforts.

Thank you again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, I want to thank you.</p>
<p>I started my first serious writing effort in May with huge anticipation, only to fizzle out at the beginning of July after realizing I hadn&#8217;t nailed down what you revealed in this article.</p>
<p>At the beginning I thought I had a good over-arching idea of how my story would begin, progress, and conclude. The plot, subsequent twists, the antagonists, protagonists, sub-plots, relationships, romances, and rivalries, but I still felt something was missing. </p>
<p>And then I read this article. Somewhere in the back of my subconsicous, there was a dim bulb I knew existed, but I could never find the rope to flick it on, being in a dark corner without a form; a definition.</p>
<p>The first plot point. Since you called it by its name and helped me understand it better, my story which I slowly lost hope on has what I believe is the formation of a complete FPP.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll be applying what I learn from your blog to my efforts and try to knit everything together again, from where I left off. Giving serious consideration to getting your 101 tips book too. Another resource never hurt one&#8217;s efforts.</p>
<p>Thank you again.</p>
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		<title>By: Sandra</title>
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		<dc:creator>Sandra</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 Aug 2009 20:19:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Larry, I like how you include that The First Plot Point can be life altering yet quiet and gentle. So much of what I read seems to imply that things have to be hard and fast to work in today&#039;s stories. I feared there was no room left for a more subtle approach.

Thank you for showing there is.

Sandra</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Larry, I like how you include that The First Plot Point can be life altering yet quiet and gentle. So much of what I read seems to imply that things have to be hard and fast to work in today&#8217;s stories. I feared there was no room left for a more subtle approach.</p>
<p>Thank you for showing there is.</p>
<p>Sandra</p>
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