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		<title>By: Martin Greaney</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2680</link>
		<dc:creator>Martin Greaney</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 11 Mar 2010 20:36:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey, it&#039;s funny - I didn&#039;t think you&#039;d pick up on my jeans/jacket comment! (New blog and all that!) Suppose that&#039;s the cool thing about blogging communities.
Another quick thanks for all your posts - I do enjoy something more than just the &#039;motivational B.S.&#039; as you put it. Cheers!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hey, it&#8217;s funny &#8211; I didn&#8217;t think you&#8217;d pick up on my jeans/jacket comment! (New blog and all that!) Suppose that&#8217;s the cool thing about blogging communities.<br />
Another quick thanks for all your posts &#8211; I do enjoy something more than just the &#8216;motivational B.S.&#8217; as you put it. Cheers!</p>
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		<title>By: jennifer blanchard</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2577</link>
		<dc:creator>jennifer blanchard</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 16:51:19 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the shout-out, Larry! I appreciate it!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the shout-out, Larry! I appreciate it!</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2575</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 15:55:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>@Janice -- I agree, there&#039;s room for eloquence.  It&#039;s just a fine line, and when one crosses it one sees purple. Or more accurately, the readers sees it.  I call it being &quot;drunk on one&#039;s own eloquence,&quot; and it&#039;s fatal to a story.  Been there.  Read it all the time in the unpublished stories I analyze.

My favorite prose artist is Colon Harrison, called the Poet Laureat of American thriller writers.  Never purple.  Hardly an adjective anywhere.  And yet... spellbinding.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>@Janice &#8212; I agree, there&#8217;s room for eloquence.  It&#8217;s just a fine line, and when one crosses it one sees purple. Or more accurately, the readers sees it.  I call it being &#8220;drunk on one&#8217;s own eloquence,&#8221; and it&#8217;s fatal to a story.  Been there.  Read it all the time in the unpublished stories I analyze.</p>
<p>My favorite prose artist is Colon Harrison, called the Poet Laureat of American thriller writers.  Never purple.  Hardly an adjective anywhere.  And yet&#8230; spellbinding.</p>
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		<title>By: janice &#124;Sharing the Journey</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2571</link>
		<dc:creator>janice &#124;Sharing the Journey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 01 Mar 2010 13:25:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the links and good luck with your busy schedule in the coming weeks. 

By the way, I didn&#039;t comment over at Problogger; most stuff gets said in the first fifty comments, but I just wanted to say how much I liked the five point summing up, especially the emphasis on editing and the part about polishing your writing like an obsessive poet. I loved this line: &quot;...craft is the product of evolved instincts colliding with proven principles.&quot;
 
I have one query though; I agree with what you say about the importance of &#039;voice&#039;, and of brutal editing, but what if that voice is &lt;i&gt;naturally &lt;/i&gt;lyrical, and bleaching all traces of  &quot;purple&quot; from it is like stripping away the element of sound from a poem?

Last week I read a powerful, hauntingly beautiful novel called &#039;An Equal Stillness&#039;.  It won a best debut novel award and read like poetry; no image felt superfluous, the metaphors meshed elegantly and the story structure was as tight as a complex sonnet. The author had intelligence, breath and presence as well as a distinctive voice. The writing was exquisite, intense and perfectly pitched, but didn&#039;t tip over into purple prose as it could so easily have done. But it &lt;i&gt;was &lt;/i&gt;lyrical and it did get published, and it did win an award. 

There&#039;s room for so much more in the world of published books than fast paced plot driven action, easy-read romantic teen horror, and formulaic chic-lit full of flowery detail-bloat. And thank God there&#039;s definitely enough room in the blogosphere for more than &lt;i&gt;How to&lt;/i&gt; posts. 

Thanks, Larry, for always reminding us that hard work, talent and toolbox skills still don&#039;t add up to success without great ideas, an artist&#039;s sensibility and that &quot;mother&#039;s love&quot; you mentioned in your post. We all need to be reminded of the hope left at the bottom of Pandora&#039;s box.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the links and good luck with your busy schedule in the coming weeks. </p>
<p>By the way, I didn&#8217;t comment over at Problogger; most stuff gets said in the first fifty comments, but I just wanted to say how much I liked the five point summing up, especially the emphasis on editing and the part about polishing your writing like an obsessive poet. I loved this line: &#8220;&#8230;craft is the product of evolved instincts colliding with proven principles.&#8221;</p>
<p>I have one query though; I agree with what you say about the importance of &#8216;voice&#8217;, and of brutal editing, but what if that voice is <i>naturally </i>lyrical, and bleaching all traces of  &#8220;purple&#8221; from it is like stripping away the element of sound from a poem?</p>
<p>Last week I read a powerful, hauntingly beautiful novel called &#8216;An Equal Stillness&#8217;.  It won a best debut novel award and read like poetry; no image felt superfluous, the metaphors meshed elegantly and the story structure was as tight as a complex sonnet. The author had intelligence, breath and presence as well as a distinctive voice. The writing was exquisite, intense and perfectly pitched, but didn&#8217;t tip over into purple prose as it could so easily have done. But it <i>was </i>lyrical and it did get published, and it did win an award. </p>
<p>There&#8217;s room for so much more in the world of published books than fast paced plot driven action, easy-read romantic teen horror, and formulaic chic-lit full of flowery detail-bloat. And thank God there&#8217;s definitely enough room in the blogosphere for more than <i>How to</i> posts. </p>
<p>Thanks, Larry, for always reminding us that hard work, talent and toolbox skills still don&#8217;t add up to success without great ideas, an artist&#8217;s sensibility and that &#8220;mother&#8217;s love&#8221; you mentioned in your post. We all need to be reminded of the hope left at the bottom of Pandora&#8217;s box.</p>
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		<title>By: Viviane</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2563</link>
		<dc:creator>Viviane</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Feb 2010 19:14:31 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thing not to forget about hot cheese:  we all likes it on pizza.  And we all likes pizza ...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thing not to forget about hot cheese:  we all likes it on pizza.  And we all likes pizza &#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Ez</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2561</link>
		<dc:creator>Ez</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Feb 2010 17:09:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found this blog from your posts on menwithpens.  

Good luck with your writing this week.  See you on the other side.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this blog from your posts on menwithpens.  </p>
<p>Good luck with your writing this week.  See you on the other side.</p>
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		<title>By: Monica</title>
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		<dc:creator>Monica</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 26 Feb 2010 03:23:36 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I welcome posts from the summer (when I wasn&#039;t around) or whenever you&#039;d like. I&#039;d love to see what&#039;s in those archives! Good luck with meeting your deadline, Larry.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I welcome posts from the summer (when I wasn&#8217;t around) or whenever you&#8217;d like. I&#8217;d love to see what&#8217;s in those archives! Good luck with meeting your deadline, Larry.</p>
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		<title>By: Suzannah-Write It Sideways</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2555</link>
		<dc:creator>Suzannah-Write It Sideways</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 20:48:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thank you for directing your lovely readers to my site! And all the best with your bust schedule in the coming weeks :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thank you for directing your lovely readers to my site! And all the best with your bust schedule in the coming weeks <img src='http://storyfix.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Bruce H. Johnson</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2553</link>
		<dc:creator>Bruce H. Johnson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 18:15:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeh, holding your work in your hands for the first time is really a thrill. Even if a writer is going all-digital, it may be well worth his time to format it quick-like-a-bunny, toss it up on a POD site and buy his own copy to sit on his shelf.

I&#039;ve got my four novels sitting on the shelf above my desk. All I&#039;ve got to do is look up and they are a constant reminder that I walked the walk.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeh, holding your work in your hands for the first time is really a thrill. Even if a writer is going all-digital, it may be well worth his time to format it quick-like-a-bunny, toss it up on a POD site and buy his own copy to sit on his shelf.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ve got my four novels sitting on the shelf above my desk. All I&#8217;ve got to do is look up and they are a constant reminder that I walked the walk.</p>
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		<title>By: Robert</title>
		<link>http://storyfix.com/writing-all-over-the-place/comment-page-1#comment-2552</link>
		<dc:creator>Robert</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 25 Feb 2010 17:44:25 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good reads.</description>
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