Meet The Storyfixer

ABOUT THIS BLOG…

(Updated 12/18/11)

Thanks for dropping by.  Seriously, I do appreciate it.

The genesis of this blog comes from the thousands of folks who have attended my writing workshops. The consensus is this: “I’ve been attending writing workshops for many years, and I’ve read all the how-to books, and this is not only the best and clearest thing I’ve heard, it’s the first time someone has actually shown me how to write a novel (and/or a screenplay), structurally and thematically.” The developmental model referenced in that consensus feedback is what I call “The Six Core Competencies of Successful Storytelling,” which is the topic of my book by nearly the same name.

Writing workshops and how-to books come in all flavors and intentions. But rarely is the process broken down into specific developmental criteria, from concept to character to sequence and theme, with a vision for how all the parts come together to become a whole in excess of their parts. This blog is based on that process.

Now allow me to switch to third person so I can sound objective with a minimum of hubris.

Brooks is a critically-acclaimed bestselling author of four psychological thrillers, in addition to his work as a freelance writer and writing instructor.

His message to writers who wish to publish is this: the bar is very high, and the market is very crowded.  The moment you declare an intention to publish, to write professionally, you are signing up for a tidy and largely inflexible list of criteria, formats and expectations, the nature of which applies directly to what you write.  If you want to make up your own form and function of storytelling, the road is even longer.

There is only one thing you have control over in this business, and it’s not your career (which is largely out of your hands, to be honest) — it’s your manuscript. It doesn’t need to be perfect, it needs to be better than perfect, at least beter than perfectly fine. It needs to grab an agent or an editor who has seen it all before by the throat and squeeze. This blog is about how you can evolve your work to that level.

ABOUT THE BLOGGER: LARRY BROOKS…

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Other than a 17-year stint in the marketing and training business, Larry Brooks’ resume reads like a Cheesecake Factory menu. Born and raised in Portland, Oregon in 1952, he graduated with a degree in marketing communications from Portland State University in 1975, attended in the off-season during an unremarkable five-year career as a professional baseball player (he pitched in the Texas Rangers organization). This led to his first published writing: a magazine article on the life of a minor league pitcher. Still not keen on a writing career – the money sucked then, too – came a few more swings and misses: history’s worst stockbroker for the world’s largest brokerage firm, the world’s worst personnel manager in a department store (remember what Dirty Harry said about Personnel managers?), and a couple of other humbling fliers he chooses to forget. Each abandoned career resulted in another published magazine piece lampooning the experience, and his interest in writing began to emerge as his best – and perhaps last – viable career option.

He was also the voice behind the airport public address announcement we all hate (“No stopping or parking on the roadway in front of the terminal.  Violators will be cited and towed.” et al) for 14 years at PDX (Portland Internaional Airport).  As claims to fame go, this is as anonymous as it gets.

In 1983 he answered an ad for a “script writer” at a small audio-visual production company – eight art majors and a slide projector. Cut to 1996, when the company was one of the largest marketing and training firms in the western U.S., and Brooks was the executive creative director and a partner, with some 120 employees and a portfolio with more corporate videos, brochures and other useless stuff than Harlequin has romances. The business sold in 1999, at which point Brooks took the money and ran toward the career he’d been quietly cultivating on the side for the prior two decades – writing novels and screenplays. And now, as a novelist/blogger/freelancer/workshop speaker.

His first published novel, DARKNESS BOUND, was based on one of his original screenplays, featuring – here’s a surprise – a stockbroker who hates stockbrokering. It debuted in October 2000, spending three weeks on the USA Today bestseller list. His second novel, PRESSURE POINTS – an ad exec who hates the ad business – appeared to good reviews in December 2001, with comparable sales. His third novel, SERPENT’S DANCE, was a February 2003 release from Signet, also well reviewed despite selling like parkas in Pakistan, and his fourth, July 2004’s BAIT AND SWITCH , earned a starred review from Publishers Weekly, who named it their lead Editor’s Choice for that month, and at year-end to two of their notable lists: Best Overlooked Books of 2004 (the only paperback so named; perhaps, says Larry, a dubious honor) and Best Books of 2004 (lead entry, mass market).

Since then he has written two novels : SCHMITT HAPPENS (the sequel to 2004’s BAIT AND SWITCH, which remains unpublished at this writing) and WHISPER OF THE SEVENTH THUNDER, an apocalyptic thriller from Sons of Liberty Publishing (March 2010).  

In late 2002, Brooks’ script for the adaptation of DARKNESS BOUND was named a finalist in the Don and Gee Nicholl Fellowships in Screenwriting, sponsored by the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences, the folks who bring you the Oscars. It was one of ten scripts selected out of 6044 submissions, which he hopes you find impressive, especially since he didn’t end up winning one of the five Fellowships. Too dark, they said.

He did get to spend an afternoon kicking around the craft of storytelling with Frank Darabont during his week in L.A. for that contest, which, if you’ve ever seen “The Shawshank Redemption” you’ll agree is a big deal.

Brooks has been developing and teaching writing workshops since the mid-1980s. He has been named a Mentor by the Oregon Writer’s Colony, and continues to teach at workshops around the country (“Call me,” he whispers here).  His new book, “Story Engineering: Mastering The Six Core Competencies of Successful Writing,” was released in early 2011 from Writers Digest Books, based on the popular developmental model upon which he bases his workshops… and this blog.

Brooks is very happily married to his wife of 17 years, Laura, an artist and interior designer (who assures everyone who has read Larry’s first novel that she is not The Dark Lady).  He also has a wonderful son, Nelson, who is 21 and a senior at USC; three supportive step-children, Tracy, Scott and Kelly (two of whom have read all his books); and seven step-grandchildren who have no clue what “Poppy” does for a living.

Larry and Laura live in Scottsdale AZ, where he is busy writing is a** off on a new writing book (“The Search for Story”), two novels, a screenplay, a pile of freelance assignments (“call me” he whispers again), and of course, this blog.

Again, thanks for stopping by.

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Alley Pat Hauldren October 5, 2011 at 1:35 pm

Larry, sittin’ here in a coffeeshop in Arlington, Texas, struggling with my novel. You’re book & website are a godsend. Using your techniques, I just mapped out to mid-point and now working on 2nd half of book. This pantser is actually PLOTTING. (I can’t plot my way out of a paper bag.) OMG, dude, thank you so very much for your help. I don’t have it 100% but learning so much. Gracias, amigo. … Alley

Art Holcomb October 25, 2011 at 12:54 pm

Larry:

I’m a produced screenwriter of animation and have over 60 comic book / graphic novels to my credit and this is one of only two fan letters I’ve ever written. I recently had a treatment optioned for a live action movie and am currently doing the screenplay and decided to fill in my education by reading all the major authorities on the subject (McKee, Fields, Truby, etc) as well as a couple of new authors such as yourself and Chris Soth that I only recently come acrossed. Your stuff is insightful and accessible, wonderful to read and instantly understandable. A delight.

Best recommendation there is: my wife asked me why I needed to keep 20+ writing books on the shelf next to my desk when the only one that was ever next to the keyboard, opended, highlighted and annotated with my handwritten notes . . . was yours?

All the best,

Art Holcomb

No Spam October 28, 2011 at 12:20 pm

Kludgy is an adjective, not a verb. In my field we use the word regularly and I’ve never heard it used as a verb. Even as an adjective, it’s rare. It’s much more common to call something “a kludge” than to say that it’s “kludgy”.

Joan Hill November 24, 2011 at 12:38 pm

Hi,
I attended your workshop in Medford OR (actually Central Point) this fall. You are right, it was an eye opener for me. Thanks! Currently finishing up a memoir of our lives on an old-time ranch — I tell folks, that we moved 45 miles east and a 100 years back in time.

Do you have a schedule for your workshops for this next year? Especially, in eastern Washington? Or Western Idahao — o heck forget the eastern and western — what’s your workshop schedule? I am lining up folk to go.

Thanks,
Joan

Amanda November 29, 2011 at 8:03 pm

Dear Larry,

I just wanted to let you know that I just “won” NaNoWriMo. I finished 50,100 words with 1 day left to go. And it was all because of your posts in October. I planned, I knew where I was headed and I got there. Not “just one edit” away from publishable, but my first draft is officially completed.
Not only did I complete NaNoWriMo and win on my first time out, but I finally started a habit of writing every day (win), I now know I can average 1,000 words or more a day so I know what kind of goal to set myself (win).
Thanks for your posts. You are the best.

Larry November 29, 2011 at 8:17 pm

@Amanda — thanks for the feedback, so glad to hear that your NaNoWriMo was a positive experience, and that you’ve immersed yourself in the craft. Good for you, I wish all the best as you move forward. We all have an important story in us… may you find yours and may we all get to read it one day soon. Thanks for hanging on Storyfix, too. L.

Victor Powell December 1, 2011 at 10:53 am

Larry,

I have a question, what are your suggestions of adapting the core competencies, specifically the beat sheet and story structure, for scense in a short story?

Eve Harris December 8, 2011 at 8:32 pm

Hi Larry, I discovered your website while I was doing Nano, and reading your articles about Story Structure really help me understand my writing better. I have a question about the plot points. I read a blog post by Janice Hardy about the difference in Main Character and Protagonist at her blog (http://blog.janicehardy.com/2009/05/main-event.html).

Quote: “In contrast, in Tom Clancy’s Hunt for Red October, Jack Ryan stands out to me as the main character. The story revolves around him and his hunt, but he isn’t the protagonist. Ramius is the one who’s acting and driving the plot, because his choice and his actions set the entire story in motion. If you took Jack Ryan out of the story, Ramius would still act as he does. If you took Ramius out of the story, Ryan has nothing to do. But Ryan plays a vital role in balancing Ramius plot. We care abut Ramius because we care about Ryan.”

So basically the answer to “Whose story is this? (MC)” and “Who’s the one driving the plot? (Protagonist)” can be different. In that case, whose POV should I use to structure my story? Do I write the plot points based on the MC or the protagonist?

Thanks!

Evonne M. Biggins December 27, 2011 at 8:24 am

Hi, again, Larry. Okay, I think I’ve got the first plot point figured out.
On page 107 of 443, 24% on my Kindle—

In The Help, Missus Stein tells Eugenia she will read what Eugenia (Skeeter) writes about how the maids in Mississippi are treated. Without that call, Skeeter may not have gone through witht the effort or danger of writing the book. But, she decides to write the book despite the dangers to herself and the maids. = FPP.

So, when Missus Stein says that she will read what Eugenia writes, was that a FPP nudge? Or a pre-FPP hint?

Should there be a nudge or hint right before the FPP that tips the scale and gives the character a choice? (Though, we writers know that the character has no choice :-) !

Thanks, again! Evonne

Katie Pietrak December 28, 2011 at 9:20 am

Hi!

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I think your readers would love them! They are great for music lovers and writers.

Please let me know if you want more info.

Thank you for your time.

Zelda Zerafa January 22, 2012 at 2:35 am

Hi Larry,

I have been following your blog for a few years and hope to complete my first novel this year. Actually, forget ‘hope’. I WILL finish my first novel this year. There, that’s better.
I am having a hard time deciding on the genre the story fits in, and I need to know this to get guidelines about length and which agents to pitch to. It’s a love story but it has crime and chases too. What do you think? I have an outline ready.

Larry Brooks January 22, 2012 at 8:43 am

@Zelda — sounds like romantic suspense to me. If you’re pitching an agent, that should do the trick, it’s their job to find the right publishers (not all romance house publish romantic suspense, and some publishers you wouldn’t think of as romance house also publish it, with a “tougher” cover).

Either way, it’s exciting to hear about your progress and hope for this, please keep us posted! Wishing you every success. L.

Zelda Zerafa January 23, 2012 at 1:07 am

Thanks Larry for your reply. Actually, I have decided to get help from you with editing. So when I have the first 60 pages done (I’m now at 35) I am going to buy some help from you and we can go over the manuscript. I think the hardest bit for me is writing good descriptions of a. the location in the scene b. the person who’s talking c. the gestures the person makes as they speak and showing not telling what’s going on in their head. I find that Tess Gerritsen does this very well. Damn, wish I know how she did it.

Jen February 2, 2012 at 8:37 am

Lovin’ your book and your site. They’ve both been a great help. I am particularly enamored with ‘what if’ right now. It helped me immensely with a block in my plot.

Just wanted to let you know though, I’ve already signed up for your newsletter but I’m still getting the lovely, but now annoying, modal window encouraging me to sign up for a newsletter I’ve already signed up for. This happens nny time I go to a new page or blog post. I think there are gremlins in your cookies. :)

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