AUTHOR: Michael Moller
TITLE: “God Complex”
GENRE: Comic Fantasy (novel, first chapter)
SYNOPSIS: After the creator of the universe becomes trapped inside an eccentric winemaker’s body, a shy winery employee must save the world from destruction by incompetence.
ISSUES: This first chapter is a hook meant to foreshadow the first plot point occurring around the twenty-five percent mark. I’m hoping to learn if it holds the reader’s attention, if the dark humor tone comes across, and how the overall voice feels. All comments are appreciated.
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