The Six Core Competencies of Successful Storytelling

by Larry Brooks

Introduction

As a bit of a practicing cynic – due to actually having worked in this business – I’ve found myself asking if the world really needs another book about writing. Another how-to from an author who, frankly and obviously, isn’t exactly a household name. A quick Google reveals there are 2,910,000 available resources on the subject (it also shows 1,660,000 hits on my name, but I’m not kidding myself), many of which I suspect are books. Maybe 2,910,001 won’t make that much difference.

Unless, perhaps, it offers something original, fresh and powerful for writers who are tired of hearing the same old thing delivered in the same old inaccessible way.

I understand guys like Dean Koontz and David Morrell and Stephen King doing it; chances are (here’s that cynic) their publishers suggested it, hoping to cash in on the author’s name. But then I remember, having read a bunch of them myself, that never once have I found a writing book or workshop that cuts to the core issues of the craft in a clear and accessible way, that actually delivers a development model and process based on accepted criteria for effective storytelling. Most teachers eagerly tell you what needs to be done, but few offer anything about how you get it done, step-by-excruciating-ecstatic-step. Mostly they’re about theories, all valid, while delivering less than precise advice. Even Stephen King, an author who I respect, suggests in his book On Writing that once you stumble upon the seed of an idea, you should just sit down and start writing. Yeah, just take off with it and see where it takes you.

Well, I know where that approach takes you: back to the drawing board. Talk about a recipe for a rewrite. Unless you are a master of the form, function and criteria for successful storytelling – and he certainly is – this is a doomed and frankly insane way to begin your story. And yet, it is the default approach for nearly every new writer and a startling percentage of famous ones. But there are so many things wrong with King’s advice that it requires an entire book to counter them. If you’ve tried it, and you remain unpublished – or worse, unfinished – perhaps you already know why.  Mr. King suggesting this as a process is like Tiger Woods recommending that you learn the game golf – and remember, in this metaphor we’re talking about the goal of becoming a professional golfer, because being published is absolutely entering the professional ranks of writers – by picking up a club and just swinging. Good luck with that.

Here’s why it’s insane: those professionals who just start writing their stories from an initial idea do so using an informed sensibility about, and working knowledge of , story architecture.  It pours out of their head in the right order, with specific structural milestones in place.  Newer writers?  Not so much.  It pours out of their head and basically spills all over the place.

Once you get your head around story architecture and the underlying criteria of it, then you, too, can just sit down and start writing  But until then… well, like I said, it’s an insane way to discover your story.

Without the right knowledge, without mastering a formidable list of basics that is rarely talked about coherently, most of us end up being hacks with a dream that never materializes. But the knowledge is out there. In fact it’s here, right in your hands.

Interestingly, there are many books from the screenwriting world that do just what most novel-writing books don’t – they show you what to write, when to write it, what follows what, what should go be where, and why, and the criteria for ensuring your creative choices are effective ones. In other words, how to get it done. A blueprint and a process for something that is overwhelmingly considered – especially by those big name authors – to be a craft that defies blueprinting.

I assure you, they are wrong.

So is this a screenwriting book? It absolutely is if you’re a screenwriter. But it’s intended to apply those same storytelling principles – carefully adapted, revised, reshaped and put into non-screenwriting language – for novelists who heretofore haven’t benefited from the rigid rules of structure and character that apply to screenwriting. Rules, by the way, that actually set screenwriters free to create efficiently, while we novelists are destined to wander a vast landscape of creative choice without the benefit of a single road sign or map. It is that lack of form, function and criteria that makes writing and publishing a good novel so elusive.

Until now.

This book is for writers who have taken all the workshops (or not; it’s also for those who are on Day 1 of their writing journey… you may get to skip the years of pain the rest of us have invested), read all the how-to books and still don’t understand what’s wrong with their writing, and why it doesn’t attract an agent or sell to a publisher.

Don’t get me wrong, writing a great novel will always be hard, even if you do this way. But for different reasons than before, reasons that nobody can help you conquer or understand but you. Because even if you had the same expert instruction and training as Tiger Woods, chances are you’d still find yourself, at best, vying for the club championship instead of a tour card. Such is the quest for greatness regardless of the game.

This book is the culmination of twenty years of developing and teaching writing workshops, as well as writing novels and screenplays. The process model here is original and completely of my own creation – The Six Core Competencies of Successful Storytelling – yet based on the sum total of everything out there we know about what makes fiction work. Will you have heard some of this before? Certainly, the truth is the truth, I didn’t invent it. Have you seen it presented, organized and put into a context for novelists that suddenly makes the process this clear and accessible? That’s for you to decide, but I’m betting you haven’t.

Now, before you assign that last paragraph to ego, let me tell you why I’m really writing this book. Thousands of people have taken my writing workshops, and not a single attendee has told me the big picture of what I teach doesn’t seem viable. Some pick at a few nits, more than a few arrive with grave doubts, but most leave as excited believers, albeit a bit shocked. Even if you only apply a fraction of this – and frankly, you’ll end up doing it your own way anyhow – you’ll be more efficient and effective as a storyteller. I can’t tell you how many times people have told me – and this is the highest praise I can imagine hearing after a workshop – that this is the best thing they’ve ever heard about writing, even after up to thirty years of workshops, and why the hell hasn’t anyone put it together like this in the past? “Why don’t you write this stuff as a book?” I get that a lot. When you regularly hear such feedback, you begin to believe that there is something of value here for writers who are looking to quantify, analyze, calculate and blueprint the writing muse, and do it without the slightest compromise to their creativity or the childlike delight that comes from making up stories and writing them down.

Also, after years of reading and critiquing unpublished and rejected manuscripts from aspiring writers, I began to see patterns in what those stories lacked. Those patterns aligned perfectly with the Six Core Competencies model, which validated this approach as a viable and perhaps groundbreaking process for writing a novel, as well as writing a screenplay, a play or even a short story. One you are about to experience.

So let the journey begin. Open your mind and park your doubt (and your cynicism) until you find yourself in the thick of this, which not only shows you how to approach the craft of storytelling, but why traditional, random, organic, non-structured approaches are at best chaotic and inefficient, and more likely, ineffective. There is no getting around this truth – successful books written in an organic fashion (like King’s) end up covering the exact same ground, meeting the same precise criteria and eliciting the same enthusiastic reader response as successful books written my way. It’s just that the organic writers are in for a very long, often painful haul, and have absolutely no chance whatsoever of publishing their work without extensive rewrites. And even then, they have to return to the basic criteria in those rewrites to stand a chance.

Unless, of course, you are Stephen King or Tiger Woods. Every avocation has its superstar prodigies, those to whom the work comes easy and the fruits arrive plentifully. The rest of us need a little help.

The Six Core Competencies approach starts with the criteria and the architecture of storytelling and uses it as the basis for narrative. Organic writing starts with narrative and an idea — not necessarily in that order — and uses them as a process to discover (or stumble upon, sometimes by omission) the criteria and the architecture. Either way, you can get there. Or not – which is the definition of an unpublished novel. But some people like to walk, while others like to fly.

Oh, one more thing. You should know that my first published novel, DARKNESS BOUND, sold to a major New York publisher on the very first submission, with virtually no changes or rewrites required, and that it went on to be a USA Today bestseller. How? Certainly not because I’m the next Stephen King, a fact history has proven to be true. Rather, because it was designed and written according to the principles of The Six Core Competencies of Successful Storytelling. And it took only eight weeks to write. I’m just sayin’.

 

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Kelly Brown June 13, 2009 at 12:42 am

Hi, interest post. I’ll write you later about few questions!

Larry June 13, 2009 at 1:25 am

Sure, can’t wait to hear from you! Thanks — Larry

Martha Miller June 27, 2009 at 3:31 pm

You know I love your para-dig-em for modeling a story. It has helped me immeasurably and I recommend it to everyone I can. I’m delighted it’s going to be a book! Let me know where I can buy it.

J.Morgan July 2, 2009 at 7:12 pm

I’ve found I’m seeing the mountain where a mole-hill use to be. I realise now how large a task I’ve set before myself. But don’t worry, I’m not deterred just realizing that it’s not going to be a walk in the park. I’m glad to have found your site, it’s a reality check so my head doesn’t detach from my neck. Dreamers such as I, often have that problem I’m told. Thanks for keeping my feet on the ground and my nose to the grind stone. I have written alot of short stories latley here and there. The more I come up with, the more ideas that pop into my head. I’ve noticed my writing change and become more focused and less chaotic. I’m going back to my manuscript and am going to take what I’ve learned and apply it. I will someday get published and I’ll send you a copy.

Kiril The Mad Macedonian July 13, 2009 at 12:32 am

Stephen King’s notions about writing not for everyone?

Yeah, but, but, but… ;-D

I quite reading his books years ago, as his later stuff didn’t appeal to me like the stuff I grew up on in his early caeer. ;-D

An interesting article, among several I’ve found on your new site, thanks for sending me a heads-up.

I fancy myself a creative writer, and poet, and have several books on writing, and writing promps in my collection, and in addition to sharing my writing on my blog I have a pretty decent blogroll of writing reated site, to which your will be added.

I created something special in the way of a story idea, several years ago, with the idea of expanding on the 2 pieces done so far, and I have another idea, or 2, as well, but life keeps getting in the way, and a sort of writer’s block set in, not to mention I’ve never gotten much in the way of feed back on them, or my poetry, even when shared in an online writing community I once was a member of.

Shane Arthur July 22, 2009 at 5:14 pm

The intro was awesome man.

I can’t wait to get your book. I’m excited about writing again.

Regards
Shane

Jessica Bosari July 23, 2009 at 10:52 am

Seriously, this is torture. When’s it coming man? The intro sells the book!

Matt Dawdy July 30, 2009 at 5:15 pm

Sounds great. I am interested in the book. Do you have an ETA?

I have finished two novels but have not tried submitting either one (they need serious help) and I have half-heartedly used the Stephen King writing book as a guide but did find that much of what he said didn’t quite work for me because I don’t have his level of writing expertise.

In other words, I need some more nuts and bolts stuff.

Right now I spend a lot of time writing and re-writing, chopping and cutting and pasting and gluing, without any sort of clear strategy. I guess I have this idea that someday what I am patching together and constantly re-writing will look enough like a publishable novel to actually get published.

I also have a slew of writing books in my library but find most of them to be pretty useless at my current writing level.

Anyway, if you need a guinea pig… I mean test case, or test reader… for your book let me know. I would love to help you by helping me.

Regards,

Matt

Sharon August 1, 2009 at 7:11 pm

So…is it safe to assume that you LOVE torturing those afflicted with gratification NOW gene? You’re just teasing me, aren’t you? The book isn’t written yet and I have to WAIT for it. If I’m right, I bet you DO write fabulous sex scenes. You’ve clearly got a handle on building suspense and anticipation, heightening tension and leaving the reader panting to find out what happens next.

Dang, Larry. Have a heart. Name me a pre-publication reader, add me to your crit group, accidentally share a cope of the WIP with me on Google Docs. Or wait! Here’s a solution! Do an online workshop or somethin’. You could even charge money for it. I’d pay for it.

Failing that, the only alternative is becoming a dedicated fan girl. Horrors. I’ll never be able to face my friends. At least not until they read your stuff.

Nice job.

Sharon

Patricia Hansen August 10, 2009 at 5:43 pm

Wait a sec….this is just a teaser? Seriously? I need more and I need it NOW. My spillage runneth over….

Claudia August 15, 2009 at 8:02 pm

This might be a stupid question, but would the basics presented ( example-the four part story structure) apply to preschool or young elementary age story books/picture books as well? (And thank you for what you do. : ) Claudia

Larry August 16, 2009 at 9:09 pm

Claudia — children’s stories are always shorter and simpler. All of this waters down, but you still need a concept, a great character, a strong theme, good scenes and an appropriate writing voice. So “yes” to those. As for structure, it can be simpler, but you still need the essential element of a hero’s quest and some form of conflict/obstacle to that question. Without conflict there is no story, that’s as true for kids as it is for us. As for picture books, that’s even simpler… the attraction for children in that case is as much the visual as it the storytelling. If you can combine the two, you’re on to something.

Hope this helps.

Trina August 23, 2009 at 8:53 pm

I can’t wait to read the book. I have King’s “On Writing” and when I finished, I felt like the book was more for advanced or published writers…kind of a reminder book for them…and that he just scratched the surface on things. For example, he mentions a writer’s toolkit, and says “The commonest of all, the bread of writing, is vocabulary.” But he never expounds on it. There are lots of ‘profound’ statements of this magnitude but it was on such a high level, that it wasn’t what I needed.

You do need to put all of this in a book. I’ll be the first in line to buy it…actually, I’d love it if they’d put your book on the Kindle or an ereader.

Rob September 4, 2009 at 6:13 pm

I’ll be waiting for this one. I’d really like to see more on scenes and how to come up with enough to fill the four parts of a full-length novel.

Shanna October 22, 2009 at 8:52 am

I simply cannot wait to read this book! It is going to be such a big help. I just *write* and my story builds itself, but I am always looking to sharpen and hone that, to make sure my storyline is flowing but not overflowing (I tend to do that). I have just started my first novel (finally!) after many years of online writing, essays, blog posts, opinion pieces, poetry, erotica, etc. It is a daunting task and I would love to have a look at this book to help me along. We can always learn something new; even those of us who have been writing since we could first hold a Crayon!

Any idea of a release date??

Jennifer Louden October 22, 2009 at 8:21 pm

love to hear when you publish the book.

William October 25, 2009 at 7:16 pm

I am going to get your next book. I am excited for it. I found this site through your guest post on copyblogger. I like what you represent. Do you give one on one lessons?

Robert Altman December 24, 2009 at 10:56 pm

I love your site … I have hit the 1stPP of my writing career thanks to you Mr. Brooks. When I hit the NY Times Best Seller list I will promot your site free of charge — you have my word. Again, thank you.

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