The Personal Story Arc: A Guest Post by Art Holcomb

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by Larry Brooks on November 18, 2011

(Editor’s note: this should be mandatory reading for anyone with a serious writing bug.  One word: brilliant.) 

 

“I never know what I think about something until I read what I’ve written on it.” 
                                                                                        – William Faulkner

 More about the quote later.

I started my writing career as a 12 year old in San Jose, California when in 1968 I won a contest and had my one act play produced at a small San Francisco theater.  The play, entitled “The Birnbaum Guide to Hell on Five Dollars a Day”, was a goof, a class project that I was goaded into writing by my 6th grade teacher, Mrs. Hanzad.  It was about an old married couple who were accidentally killed during a European vacation and ended up having a wonderful time touring the Afterlife.

The story had a devil and imps and smoke and brimstone and ended up being a gas to write.  It also had a scene near the end where the husband has to say goodbye to the wife when it’s discovered that there was a clerical error and she was actually destined for Heaven.  It was the only really emotional scene in an otherwise funny piece and it was this scene that sold the play, the judges said. I remember that it came out of  me in a sudden rush and took me by surprise when I wrote it. I later thought several times that it should be taken out, that it had no place in the play.

I didn’t take it out.  In retrospect, I knew that it was the only way the story worked. I also came to know that it was this scene was only reason I wrote the play in the first place.

I’ve thought about the Birnbaum play off and on as I wrote other things. In my professional career I’ve scripted animation for television, optioned a film treatment to a production company, written dozens of comic books and published many poems, essays and newspaper pieces.  I came to write this piece today, in fact,  at Larry’s invitation after I sent him a long overdue appreciation for his fantastic books and posts, many of which have gotten me over some difficult writing patches and have supplied excellent motivational pushes when they were needed the most. And once again, the play came to mind as I started to write this article.

Through it all, one thing has become clear: I believe that none of my art – my writing, publications and career – would have been possible had I not written that play and gotten that scene out of me.

Of course, I now know why I had to write the goodbye scene, where the husband has to let go of his wife of forty years.  I had lost my mother to cancer several years earlier when I was six. And I came to realize why it was considered the most powerful scene in the play.

Because it came from the defining moment in my life so far.

Because it was real. Because it was actual.

It was the goodbye scene that I was never destined to have with my own mother, told by a child who had yet to learn how to keep such feelings to himself.  The scene was part of me; part of my personal story arc, and it said more about me and my life than that 12 year old boy knew at the time.

Experts will tell you that a child who has lost a parent at an early age very often turns to the arts in later life; he or she is trying to make sense of their own stories, to explain their experiences to themselves and then learn how to share them with others. The pain and abandonment that comes with such a loss will always create some kind of dramatic reaction such as it did with me. And when I finally wrote that scene out — when I heard it spoken by an actor and felt the hush of the people seated around me in the theatre — I knew I’d found something meaningful to me.  A pathway for my own personal stories. And through it, I moved one step farther as a writer and one step closer to understanding.

So . . . back to the quote.

Faulkner was right, of course. We don’t know who we are and what we know and feel until we write about it or paint it or sculpt it or dance it away into the cool, dark air. We must resist the urge to curb it and dismiss it as art-as-therapy because it can be the force behind the stories we tell. As writers, we must use every bit of whatever emotion is inside to tell our stories because, although we are each special, our experiences are not unique.  Parents die; children grow up and all things eventually change. It is that common thread of shared burdens and joys that tie your readers to you and you to them. To ignore this is to shackle your talent; to use it as part of your natural gifts is to elevate your writing to the realm of the genuine and true.

Every piece you write tells you something about yourself that you had not actively known before.  Make that knowledge part of your process.  It will be the spark that leads to greater understanding and to a deeper and more authentic work.

So, ignore your inner critics.

Learn your craft . . .

But let that six year old in you . . . out.

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Art Holcomb is a screenwriter whose work has appeared on the SHOWTIME Channel and has written for such comics as Marvel’s THE X-MEN and Acclaim’s ETERNAL WARRIORS. He has appeared as a guest and taught at San Diego Comic-Con and other conventions.  His most recent work is THE MEADOWS (with Mark L. Haynes), a science fiction police procedural.

Bruce H. Johnson November 18, 2011 at 1:44 pm

Oh, yes, if you (the author) have those experiences use the emotions, feelings, scenes, and everything in your writing. You might purge your heart of grief, but the point is since those feelings and emotions are real, you can make them real to your readers. That’s why they read fiction; for those powerful emotional experiences.

Now, that doesn’t mean that you have to suffer to be an artist. Please don’t go kill your mother and say, “That Johnson fella told me to do it.”

Go write something great.

LJCohen November 18, 2011 at 2:12 pm

Thank you for this–I found it incredibly moving. I find so much of my own experience in my writing, but only ever after the fact. That Faulkner quote makes so much sense.

spinx November 19, 2011 at 3:59 am

Great post- really excellent.

And it really holds true.
Getting it all out, writing about it. Faulkner sums it up best in his little quote.

I can only advice everyone to try that way. Pick a subject, any subject you want (love, hate, marriage, agenda…) and write about it. Write what it means in your mind, why it developed, how it affects people, why some have more of it than others…….just let it all out.

But don´t edit! Never edit on the first try.

My folders (and pages) are full of all kind of themes I never imagined I would ever write about. Reading all that stuff (my stuff!) a month later is just….strange….as if somebody else wrote that, not you.
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Yo-yo-yo——–nice post!

jann November 19, 2011 at 7:45 am

Beautiful and true. Thank you.

Cindy Hassell November 19, 2011 at 7:58 am

This makes my heart sing. Thanks for sharing it.

Martha November 19, 2011 at 9:02 am

What a wonderful way to start my morning! Thank you for sharing your story.
When I was 12 and bitten by the writing bug, I was told, “you can’t do this”, and “you can’t do that”, and it was so discouraging I stopped trying. But the bug took over again much later in my life and by then I’d developed a thick enough skin to press on. I give lots of credit to Larry and his wonderful teachings for helping me realize you can do anything and make it work if you have a few guidelines.

Brianna November 19, 2011 at 9:09 am

Excellent post. Thank you for sharing a little piece of yourself with us, Art.

Myndi Shafer November 19, 2011 at 10:18 am

Lovely and moving. Thanks.

Olga Oliver November 19, 2011 at 10:41 am

Ain’t it amazing – we all have this light. Thanks Larry for sending Art’s light in beautiful words.

Curtis November 19, 2011 at 11:28 am

“It is that common thread of shared burdens and joys that tie your readers to you and you to them. To ignore this is to shackle your talent…”

Art, you are kind in your gentle comment. I hear the song of a poet in your voice. Thank you.

Brenda November 19, 2011 at 2:00 pm

Many thanks for posting this beautiful and inspiring piece. It made sense of my childhood and why I am hyper-creative at times. Brenda

Robert Sloan November 20, 2011 at 1:03 pm

Thank you! I’m doing it now – started my first Nanowrimo this year with a great concept. A good book in progress ground to a halt on a type of writing block I haven’t had since I was ten. After days of no progress, I set it aside and started doing a horror novel with the vague intent of letting out the pain that seized me during the block. I was depressed about my writing for the first time in years.

It started pouring out. I have no idea where it’s going, except that I’ve got two ten year old boys facing the supernatural and when I was ten, I was a believer. Some of it’s biographical, a lot of it just comes from fears and fantasies I had as a lonely ten year old. I left out a lot that happened and put in things that were worse. It still has that power.

It’s working. There are times it hurts to write but it’s working. Thanks for validating what just caught fire in my word processor. I think when this is done I might even be able to go back to the first book. The only thing wrong with the first one is that I tried to edit before I was ready and choked on criticism.

Christie November 20, 2011 at 1:39 pm

Thanks for sharing this post — something I really needed to hear. I’ve really struggled with this topic, but now I feel so much more confident about it. Very, very helpful!!

Dana Kuznar November 20, 2011 at 6:51 pm

This beautiful post really choked me up, and I’m not sure why. I only know that I feel about writing as I feel about exercise: Excruciating to do, but exhilarating when done.

Monica T. Rodriguez November 21, 2011 at 9:50 am

An incredibly validating post. Only after writing my first draft of my WIP did I realize how much of my personal emotional journey was part of my main character’s arc. She’s not me by any means, but emotionally, we’ve got a lot in common. Your post will remind me to use my emotions when I write. The emotions will be real, and the story will ring true.

Thank you, Art, and as always, Larry.

Larry Peterson November 23, 2011 at 6:08 am

This was great—beautiful insight into why we do what we do.
Thanks for posting.

Michael J. Chavez November 27, 2011 at 3:13 pm

Ever since I started writing, I started laughing. And that feels so satisfying.

Art Holcomb December 6, 2011 at 10:55 am

Thanks for all the great feedback, very gratifying – and thanks to Larry for the opportunity. I apologize for not posting back sooner but I was on deadline.

Reading storyfix.com is something I now recommend as one of the building block for excellence in writing and for a productive career. It’s the first blog I read before I start the day’s writing! Keep up all the good work and I look forward to seeing you in print very soon.

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